Michi Wow... Maybe you could let Mimi help him about his problem *and that they didn't met up before* and that he tries to deal with his past and look for the futer..Tries to help him. But who talked in the end of the chapter[some one is trying to put out his nerves]?You could let Mimi apear and deffend him...

P.S: But don't add a sorato please..

Like the story, no grammer or spelling errors that I could spot. My only problem is the fact that it seems rather thin and in need of more stuff.
Still, I'll be waiting for the next chapter. If there is a next chapter coming.

ROTFLMFAO! That was awesome! It's nice to know that there are other writters out there with the most severe cases of writters block that even I suffer from... Not much to the story... More the A/N that I enjoyed but as soon as your block fades I'll be excited to read the rest of it.. maybe you could do like "A Christmas carol" deal with past, present and future for Tai to figure out for himself that he really isn't that bad off or something... Tee Hee Keep up the good work If you want you can even read my Digimon stories in the meantime of your writters block... that's what I'm doing.. I think if you emmerse yourself in what you want to write it comes easier... At least that's my plan! Happy reading to you and I'm going to continue to read hoping that my block will fade