Another really good job! I can definitely see Tim turning out like that. Blessings, Sophia

As always, your stories get less reviews than they truly deserve. I read your perspectives stories first and loved them, keep it up.

The only bad thing is that is was a little hard to keep up with the pov changes in perspectives, but that dosn't seem to be the case here. YAY.

that was really gewd! now i am off to go read yer batman stories!

How sad :(, I mean I love Tim Drake, I didn't like that future, at least not all of it, that he became the Bat and that Bruce adopted him was great, but to think of him as a blind and having to wear the mask because of his accident, :(.

I love the Bart part, but I'm sad that people has to think that bad things have to happen for people to apreciate what they have.

A great story, thanks,

Omigod... that was /sooooo/ well-written. That was awesome. I'm serious. It was very, very, very sad, but very, very, very good. The awesomeness made up for all the angst. Keep it up!

Excellent. Your future for Impulse was an elegantly, depressingly plausible way of stopping him without any coy tricks or gimmicks. Let down by his metabolism again.

The Robin situation I found it harder to relate to. Too much foreknowledge would surely have changed the future, and DC heroes know time is not immutable. That part just didn't quite gel with me I'm afraid. And a bit of depth with Superboy would have been nice, or else don't use him. Still, it was a story well told, a dark story, but a thought out one.

AGH! Heartless! Absolutely heartless! Could you be any more cruel? Bart not being able to run? How sad! And Robin . . . words can't express his future. An angsty dark story but I find myself wanting to read it again. I however do feel that Superboy is shallow and stupid after hearing what happens to the other memebers of Young Justice how can he still stand their and compliment his younger self about HAIR? But I digress. . . Wonderfully written.

That was kind of depressing, but I liked it. Well, except for Batman being a cyborg. I would've liked to have seen Superboy and what his double said to him.

That say was waaaaayyyyy to sad, tight a happier one where Impulse down't have Athsma, my big brother has athsma and his left lung collapsed and now he has to just sit around all day and he's reeeeaaaaaaaaallly sad! ::Starts to cry and sob and kick and hit,:: An' I'm gonna get it by the time I'm Twenty and thats way to close for my appinion and I don't ever never ever!, wanna have it! Make it so that Rob doesn't turn into Phantom of the Opera!

Gads, you are depressing. But I like your stuff anyway. I've read all your Batman stories, *grins* and I have to say I liked them a bit better then this one. They have a better...flow...but the only way to get better at something is practicepracticepractice. Great story though, I loved the ending and thought your Impulse was fantastic.

Hmm. I liked this one. It was a sad ending, but a good one. I liked you're handling of Tim and Impulse. Impulse especially. He seemed almost child-like and I really felt sorry for him. The way Tim comforted him was nice too. My only problem with the story was that Superboy seemed insensitive. I don't know his character very well, though, so that may just be the way he is in the comics.

Wow! Very simply put I know, but this was an amazing story. Thanks

This one gave me the chills, but I LIKED it... it makes a lot of sense, too... Please do a sequel including the girls - please...?

I read this fine piece of work at the YJ message board. Me gusta! I would like to see anothetr YJ on, please! Bonus if Secret is in it!

Oooooooooh wee! That was, wow!

Umm, sorry, Impulse-mode sneaking up on me.

Absolutely incredible and achingly perfect. A dark and shining future.

Write more, *soon*. Before my withdrawl symptoms become too acute.