Aww I love Paralai fics! Amazingly writen who

genious? work on that, so i can agree. anyway...you've really changed the mood. its more like...gross than sweet and ... a really good... yeah. this would never happen in the game. i mean yeah, thats why they call it fanfiction, but... you still have to make it seem realistic.

Hi! i loved your story and thought that this last chapter was cute! oh and i loved the last paragraph or so. great fic-much love ~Cat~

HI! aww..Yay for Baraine! i love this pairing lots and the part about when Paine forgot what she was saying and thought it must've had something to do with cheese, i just started choking on my drink i was laughing do hard. i like your fic alot, much love ~Cat~

adolescent means teen. if she's six...sigh whatever

whoever yells that is a loser

Hi, umm, three things i love, and 4 things I hate.

1.I love your story

2.I love Paine

I love Aurianes (If we can have Aurikkus we can have Auraines)

1.I hate Gippal, he is evil

2.I really hate Nooj, he dates LaBlanc (shudder)

3.I especially hate Baralai! He should stay away from Paine, she is too good for him.

I hate Aurikkus almost as much as I hate Baralai.

In conclusiuon, Auraines rule, (though there aren't many of them) Aurikkus suck, Gippal, Baralai, and Nooj can all burn, and your story is awesome.

Nice chapter i thought it was a perfect ending i really liked it,2 thumbs up to u

Laughing and crying at the same time! Fab story i hope it's not ur last!

Ha Ha! that was a great ending! you did the wedding very nicely! oh! I just found this story and now its ended. Yay! happy ending YaY!

Go Paine! Go Baralai screwing in the grass...priceless!

Thank you for this, I loved it.

I've reached the end, boy is your mailbox going to be full. Well, overall I must say this has been quite the rollercoaster ride. I'm sad it will be ending but as you said, all good things must so, I'll be putting this on author alert till then.

bye

Angel Taisha

That's a good explanation of how come the pyreflies didn't enter Paine's body in the Den of Woe, nice job!

How dare you make me cry -sob- Oh, so sad!

Pie? I like pie...-tummy grumbles-

"We were...until Gippal decided that we should hide in this tree."

That was funny!

Sorry to hear about the flamer, they suck, really. All you're trying to do is write a great story and someone has to poop all over it. Don't let it bother you, which I'm sure it hasn't. This chapter was really good, despite what you may think of it.