So nice keep making fan-fics cause u r awesome even better than me!

I think the story was about the two different sides to seto

ohawwwww! So kawaii!

I throughouly enjoyed the story, it was good and I liked how you made Kaiba and Maokuba.

This is a great story. You should keep more chapters to this. I would like to read more of your stories.

The story stunk and why don't you review my stories?

That was a pretty good story. I bet Chibi T will agree with me on two things. One is that it was really too mushy. The second thing is that Mokuba should commit scucide.

Nice fic. _ Mokuba an author...kinda likes some of us out there. _ Anyway, this is a great fic. Later.

A little mushy for me, but it's still good. Have you seen the latest Shonen Jump? (It's a magazine about a few various manga/anime, including yu-gi-oh) It talked about the author of "Hikari no Go", apparently it started as some manga a manga fan drew, and sent in to a childrens manga award in Japan thingy, and it won, and I read some of it in Shonen Jump. Is that where you got the idea for a child (Mokuba) to win a writing award? That would make sense.

THAT WAS AWESOME! Okay, Mokuba's twelve, *Thinks for a while* and I'm a good writer according to what everyone's been saying, I've been writing for two years, or at least one, I think I can become I famous author too! _ My dream will becoming true. Anyway, this was amazing! I'm going to put it on my favorites! Bye!

This was so sweet. I love how Kaiba's going to read everything his brother wrote now.

Shi: Pathetic. And to think My Hikari wasted my time and yours reading that crap.
Sdrive: *hit's Shi with hammer (Named Bob)* dumb asshole. I thought i told you you can't start reviews.
Shi: X_X
Sdrive: I thought that was really touching. I also think that you should write a sequel to this story and let it be what Mokuba wrote. I bet it would be very cool.
Shi: uhg, i, i think that
Sdrive: NO ONE CARES WHAT YOU THINK! *hits Shi With Bob*
Shi: _
Sdrive: Sorry you had to put up with him.
Power to the Hikari's

Funny! (_~ ;)

I like it. It's not mushy at all, in fact I think you captured exactly how much Seto cares for his brother. He's just slightly OOC...

this is like me and my sister! she doesn't like to read my stories but when i make her she always comes through w/ a compliment.
very cute!