*poke* its already a very long time ago that you updated *poke poke* when are you going to update because I really want to know what's next, so I hope you'll update soon

Hey, it's good, but when are you going to update?

It's almost six months ago and I want to know what there is going to happen.

So post the next chapter soo :)

This is not bad, actually. *claps hands* Except that I just have a niggling problem with one of the words that you constantly spell, the word 'feel'. It's spelt like that, not 'feal', or 'fealing', or 'fealt'. I wouldn't have minded it if it only appeared a few times, but each time you type the word, the error pops out rather glaringly. But, seriously, this is a great idea for a fanfiction. I hope that you have more. Work hard!

HEY!...I like your story! Its very cool! PLease write more and keep up the good work!...-_-...I sound like a teacher when I said "kepp up the good work!" *shivers* Scary! Ja Ne!