i would very much like to know how this story ends

Great chapter :D

so far, so good ... wouldn't mind reading more, but ...

Come on! I've just finished reading this fic, and I want more of it. You've got a great story going, and you're a good writer. Hope I'll see more of your work in the future? :)

eve dawn i get it lol nice story

Your stroy is great. I love all the twists. Hope you can update soon

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!

AMAZING WICKED AWESOME STORY!

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PLEASE! *puppy pout*

I love this story soo much. Excellent job so far, keep updating!

GREAT story! I just read the whole thing through, and I absolutely LOVE it! Can't wait for more, PLEASE update very soon!

Aww, poor Dawnie. It's hard when your parent(s) suddenly have other kids. Too bad Spike didn't get the chance to break the news to her himself.

ok, methinks it's time for an update. this is a great story! :)

i luv this so much but damn u kno how to use a cliffhanger

All that time, and she just tells him now that he has another daughter? I hope Spike demands a paternity test. And if she was his, then why do the kids look so different? The little girl shouldn't even have brown eyes, if Dawn's turned out blue. Doesn't genetically work.

i luv this story..r u ever gunna update it?..i really wanna find out whts gunna happen...exspecially wht drusilla wants dawn to do

I really love this story, but is it ever going to get updated again? Please update it!