Fucking retarded

Good luck getting that wish granted, Harry.

Not a bad premise for a story, but very poorly executed. Original elements, such as Faerie blood, rarely work in an HP story, and this proves no exception.

High School?
Recess?

Harry isn't American he's British and the school is in the UK
It's Secondary School and Break

Oh and warrior mode is really cringe mate

Other than that it's a pretty good story keep it up

forgive but never forget? wtf is he going to be forgiving or forgetting? That a little malfoy was nervous and trying to talk to another kid while getting fitted or that he offered his friendship a second time and being willing to put their first meeting behind them? Harry makes no sense. He also already knows Slytherin and Gryffindor don't get Long from Riley. however when draco says it, it must be a slight to his family? ridiculous. whatever. still a good story so far, just... you know, it makes very little sense.

so messed up. Harry gives Ron a second chance but keeps throwing draco's offer of friendship in his face. repeatedly. both times draco came in and spoke at the wrong time, but he didn't know that. Harry was frustrated and took it out on malfoy both times. and yet some how he is being weirdly nice and forgiving and shit to Ron. i don't get it.

Aw...I thought that this chapter name was referring to The Punisher! You know, Frank Castle?

People. ITS A FANFICTION. IT DOES NOT HAVE TOO FOLLOW CANNON

Cell phones, really? Last time I checked, HP was set in 1991.. they didn't have those back then.

Really? Suddenly hes puking after witnessing death numerous times before including having killed someone himself... Why not stick to one personality and leave the bipolar bullshit out of it eh?

good story but the Greek goddess of the moon is Artemis and before her the titan of the moon was Selene not Serenity

This story definitely had an interesting start, but Harry is acting more like a 14 year old with a bad attitude. Even with the premise of being raised by a crime lord, I think an 11 year trying to be that bad ass is really unrealistic, a bit of a joke, and ruins the flow of the story. I keep expecting him to be going into his 3rd year, but he is still starting his first. He also seems way more spoiled, annoying and self entitled than Draco. Props though for the unique plot twist and Au!

Pegasus feather isn't a wand core that exsists. Pegasi don't have feathers. Not to mention how ollivander only uses 3 core types Phoenix, Dragon heartstrings, and unicorn hair. As he said "They make powerful wands. Most others dont work as well as these." In pottermore.

Killian should have replied "It's raining men. Get a better forecaster next time, fool!" Sorry, but this whole empire business is really overdone. I was prepared to like this, and your track record made it easy to forgive a lot of foolishness, but sad to say I'm done. This didn't astound and amaze like I hoped. Still good for the times, though, probably. Love from Cindy Standards.

You know it too, babe. Do you need the same author's note in every doggone chapter? Just wondering and pondering, you understand.