Reviews for Elegy
Restless Joy chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
oh my god...that was awesome. it was so sad and beautiful...I cried! wow...you rock!
saz7777777 chapter 1 . 5/10/2004
that was so sad...i thought i was going to be gross, u nomax and michael together...and i was gonna flame at u...but it was really sad...
Ambrosia chapter 1 . 11/15/2003
Aw... that's so sad. ~sniffle~ and angsty. Just lovely. OOh, but u shld write an updated one too, coz now with everything that's happened it's all different. michael has his thing and max has his shield thing and stuff... ooh, i know! It can still be michael and max and some civilian who lost a significant other because of nasedo, but he can have become totally obsessed by the alien thing, and he's got his hands on one of those pentagonal thingoes that blocks their alien powers! Yeh! And then, y'know, the rest writes itself, or rather, *has* written itself, sort of...
Trinity Day chapter 1 . 3/26/2001
Wow. Amazing. Very powerful. Great job, that's all I can say.
gemma chapter 1 . 3/17/2001
That was so good but really sad.
Guster chapter 1 . 1/18/2001
That was so good. It's so sad. A really good Max POV
Brittany chapter 1 . 1/4/2001
WOW! THAT WAS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I HAVE EVER READ! SAD, BUT ENTERTAINING!
Lioness Black chapter 1 . 1/3/2001
That was amazing. That's all I can say. It was amazing~Lioness
Dinner Jax chapter 1 . 1/3/2001
Wow!that story woz amazing!really got my attention!quite long though!very interesting!Brill mate!
Codes chapter 1 . 1/3/2001
U know, I might love Michael so Much Better, but in a way for some odd reason I kind I liked this Story. I believe they way yah wrote it, because u just made me feel like I was Max for a Second. thanks...Kept up the Great work! If yah get flamed don't listen to them, it was good. I'm a big Michael fan and I loved it.

Cheerio
Arista chapter 1 . 1/2/2001
I really liked this story, I just wish that you made it so in the end Max did get over Michael's death in the end. But it was still really good. Hope you right more.
Tru chapter 1 . 1/2/2001
That was so sad, but no duh, you said it would be. it was really good though.
catherine neil chapter 1 . 1/2/2001
okay, I'm going to get in first and say that I KNOW the formatting on this story sucks- it's not my fault! But everything keeps going horribly wrong! This story looked way better before I uploaded it...I don't know what's gone wrong with the first paragraph...(pathetic attempt to get nicer reviews)