Very good story, love it. :)

haha INdian style lol

you did really good i cried at the end

HEEEEEEEeeeee New Kapcom i see what you did there

It was a good story. A very good story indeed.

wow. That was a really cool story. The interaction between Leviathan and Zero was really neat. And I love X's return.

Ah.. yes, you did. It was good. In my brain and other stories, Harper and his siblings live. X3

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*puts hand on chest, bows*

At least Harpuia wasn't a jerk. *snuffles Harpuia... wait. That's weird. ANYWAY-*

*pats Fefnir* D'aww... he's one of my favorites. But then again ALL of the guardians are my favorite. X3 -

Urk... flying in the face of canon... going against my belief that the Guardians are like siblings... that Harpuia rocks the hizzouse... that Ciel is in love with Zero... ERRK... but I STILL LIKE IT...! ... C2-ED!

That was very nice story. I'm kind of sad how it ended, but it was still very good. I loved it.

Damn... it's a shame leviathin had to die. why does it seem that whenever zero finds happiness it's torn away from him? ah well... he proves the saying "what doesn't kill you only makes you stronger." There's always ceil tho. It's good he's back with X. THE DYNAMIC DUO MAKES A COMEBACK! Great story! I enjoyed reading it.

Very brilliant story. The sad ending and sense of deja vu worked well...although I thought the fight against Fefnir could have been wrote slightly better.

it was a really good story and i enjoyed reading it i didnt like that leviathan died but it worked so perfectly and its true that zero will always fight for everyone

Good