Please continue! I love stories like this! Your a great writer

I love this fic, its awesome, I was actually a bit scared halfway though reading it, anyways, you have got to update sometime soon, please!

WHY HAVEN'T U UPDATED THIS?

AH!

Oh well it was great.

Too bad...

Hey, I thought Bloody Mary scratched your eyes out or something... Buy hey, whatever, Good Story so far! (minus the cliffhanger and all... -;)

Hola, I guess it's about time I review something of yours, since you reviewed Summoner and yada yada yada yada...sorry, the button broke. And it's not like I live to flame you guys, but I just can't help but do that. I'm just sad because it lacks your personality. You say my things have either the quirks and tangents of me or extreme OOC sadness (which, believe me, if I cry, I cry my ass off. You don't want to see it.) and I just can't see YOU two in it. I guess it's not what most people hope for, to see the author in the story (but a nonimportant narrarator who tells tales). And I can't see you in your other pieces either. Stick to drawing...men.

Have a good week (ooh, people hate it when I end tangents like that),

Raven, AKA Kat

PS: It's chap three, and I left the review here so it would make a kitty face. See? :3. It's adorable. I love cats, don't you? Especially black ones, like my Spike. He's like a seal, except with more blubber...perhaps.

I love this story. It's great. Update soon please.

No! Just when it's getting exciting too. Why does Bloody Mary hold a grudge against them? I mean they didn't do anything to her, did they? I know Yusuke messed around and said Bloody Mary three times in front of the mirror in that shop, but that can't be the reason. And what's this, it can control people too? This is a difficult enemy to deal with, especially if she's not human, demon nor ghost. And what doesn't reflect? Even shiny wooden floors reflect and toilet seats and knives and water. Basically, most of the important necessities reflect, and water is everywhere. So how will they deal with her? I can't wait to find out. Update soon!

Blue Eyes Shining Dragon & Hiei: -ish frozen in fear- O_O

Roze: Ok guys, it wasn't that scary... Except the part with the hook, the blood, and the scary lookin' face. _;

BESD And Hiei: O_O

Roze: Ok guys, it's not funny anymore!...Guys? -walks over and pokes Hiei-

Hiei: -is a cardboard cutout, falls down-

Roze: O_O AHH! HIEI'S DEAD! -runs around the room like a headless chicken- AH!

BESD: -ish also a cardboard cut out-

Roze: -passes out- X_X

-in the closet-

BESD:Ya think it's safe to come out now?

Hiei: Lemme check. -sticks head out the door, 5 seconds later...- Yeah it's safe. -jumps out and closes the door-

BESD: OW! -rubs snout- That hurt!

plz update soon! i'm dying to know what happens next!

Hello!

Hey, I've been waiting for you for years, what's up?

Anyway, I really want that chap 12 and what happens next, okay? I'm really expecting you especially in this hectic hours of college days, the only relaxation I would want to get is a good fic - especially from you! So, please update!

O_O...Nope, I don't know of any good KeikoXYusuke fics. Gomen nasai! Anyways, I love this story. But, its getting me freaked out. -looks suspiciously at mirror in room- Im staying away from anything that reflects. -turns on TV- that takes care of one thing..now...2 more to go..BWUAHAH -cough, cough-.

Continue? I wuv this story. -laugh- I love the supernatural. I've seen my mothers grandmother downstairs before. I was told, I got all my looks from my mom, her grandmother, and my moms mom. I dunno. How 'bout you? lol!. Please continue! Lovely, indeed. Very lvoely. !

_...eep..._

wuvs and huggles, Kita

This fanfic is so great! And this is coming from an allaround fanfic hater! How can you just stop writting like that? This is a really beatuiful fic. You have a talent USE IT! please?

Ack! It was going great and NOW you stop! Hmph! Please you can't stop now! Oh are Kurama and Botan going to hook up? One more thing to. PLEASE DIN'T LET KURAMA DIE! PLEASE! Update soon .

This is a really good fan fic...it is really exciting!

... i started reading this at about eight. it is nearly ten now. and i hope i do not get nightmares frome this. my nightmares haunt me for weeks after the nightmare ... and the nightmares are far more vivid and realistic than what gave them to me. in other words, your fic is damn scary. and i like it! bye!