Well this is a little more twisty then the original version. Don’t know what one I like more just yet so I will reserve my opinion until we’re furthur in.

I wish Elrohir should just take Harry back home and I’m glad Dudley is changing

FREAKING UUUPPPDDDAAATTTEEE PPPLLLEEEAAASSSEEE

I know it has been a long time, but I really hope you update.

I really hope you might consider updating this wonderful story! Pretty please?!

This is not a flame but simple conclusion; Started out intriguing but...sorry to say, a disappointment...I was hoping to find something more than Harry's betrayal plot and a stronger basis for that betrayal. I mean sure, rape is strong reason to feel betrayed but...something is missing in this plot. It felt more like something fancy and doesn't have any actual history to it. Even if it is a fanfiction, the fact that a reader could not connect or that the story felt too fabricated makes this a poor written story. Dumbledore felt too weak even for the manipulative sort. His reasoning is lacking, too lacking. There are also no story build up. The time jump is heretic and has no connection. This also consisted of more dialogue than an actual story. The emotion of the characters are also fractured. It does not feel like an actual person that you can relate to even for story development. Again, this is not a flame but an honest review. There is still room for improvement. Try not to be lazy when writing out the story instead of relaying on just the dialogue. Also, the interaction of characters must be realistic especially the emotions. If you have a plot, flesh it out and don't write it down like a side note. A confrontation should be more emotional and less shout match. There should be the regular betrayed question like 'why' before the explosion. The way you lay this out make Sirius and Remus more like the confused victim instead of Snape/Elrohir. Give stronger reasons behind their action because since you already started after Year 5, the readers would have been more familiar to the canon Sirius and Remus and dropping this bomb does not feel like the known character even if it is fanfiction. Try to manipulate their original story and behaviour so the transition from canon to OOC feel more real. In other word, don't rush it all out.

I love this so far! The only thing that I have to say is that I wish it were a bit more descriptive and that each chapter was a bit longer. All that I hope is that maybe after your done writing this story that you go back to revise it and make it even more charming then it already is! I hope you enjly writing this, just as I enjoy reading it. I really want to see how the story progresses and how you grow and evovle even more as a writer. :) XD

Excellent story! Please update!

Pro's: THIS IS A FANTASTIC STORY!

Con's: you have to be very careful with your spelling; you spelled celebrate with an 's' and it made me miss read it as selibate-or celibate- which means "personal commitment to avoiding sexual relations"

i have id about Arwen Undómiel ghost come harry about all elf's back help

I love the idea of Severus being an elf. I always wanted to read a story about that. HP/LotR with Snape as a main character.

Know anymore good ones?

Anyway, anymore chapters soon?

please update

hurry hurry hurry update really really soon!I LOVE IT!

strange tale but so nice in a way. i hope you update sometime.

Go Elmorfin! Excelent name for him, by the way. Star with Black Hair... Harry really does sound like his name.

By the way... when you wrote Imladris as meaning the Last Homely House, you were mistaken. Imladris means Deep Cloven Valley. The Last Homely House is Elrond's house, not the valley itself. Please continue.

CT