I do believe I'm about to cry...

Great story-true to the characters. Very sad-but it really was the 'right' chapter.

Wow... I realize that this story was written almost a year ago, but I just finished reading it and I say again: wow. But I'm wondering, is it finished? I guess it is, and if so it's a great ending, I'm just a bit clueless when it comes to... everything. Meh, not making sense. Anyhow, yes, I love this story! Great job! Bye. -Jos*/ksc

hi i like this story, it really shows the emotions between Eames and Bobby... and how he's almost losing strenght, that was a well piece of written work! i've read all three chapters and i can't wait for you to upload more! great work and luv it!
venusrose

beautifully written...

I normally don't get choked up with fanfic but this one got me. It was a beautiful story and ultimately had a good ending. Or, at least I assume that's the end. Either way, please keep up the writing, I'm looking forward to becoming familar with your work.

Good chapter. Write more soon.

Tenderly handled, sad yet not unexpected. Are you gonna take it any further at any point do you think?

Wow. I don't normally read CI fanfiction, but I came across this story and I love it. I was suspicious, at fist, of the going back in time. But it is a beautiful scene.
Waiting for more,
Rose.

This is the best story I have ever read. Please, please, please write more. Please...

i have only one thing to say to you:
more. now please.

This is such a beautiful fic.
I loved the ending, it was so touching.
You kept in character, i could see Goren and Eames doing all of this.
Thank-yu for this wonderful story. I hope you write many more beautiful ones.
Regards
Kahlia

Good fic

This story is freakin' amazing. You really capture Goren's character. Amazing. Do not rewrite this. It doesn't need it. Keep it coming.

You think this needs a re-write? You're the author so I won't argue but this was not only readable, it was thoroughly enjoyable! You have such a beautiful way of writing, full of emotion and yet still coherent and poetic. Keep it up!