love the story, you have to write mor i really want to know if Jesse and Lexa have that baby girl they've be dreaming of, i want to know if Brennan and Shalimar have there baby, if the baby is a girl or a boy and if it really is Brennans, i would also like to know if Lainie is Brennan and Shalimar's baby. please write some more very very very soon. i cant wate to read it :) :P

once again i have reread this story i keep on doing it to all the stories that i love. Its a shame that none of them are updated any more. :(

So please, please, please, as one of your fans, and i think i may speak for all of your fans, please update this story. I want to know the ending of the story, like im sure everyone else does who reads this story. Please update soon. we want more than 13 chapters of this beautiful, fabulous and amazing work, we want 100! :P lol.

Ok i so love this story and i keep on reading it and re-reading it, now and again, as its such a good story i love it. So please please please continue writing this story and update it soon.

You have to finsh it, i wont to find out what happens in the end! PS i love love love it

Very interesting. I LOVE that Emma is alive. Can't wait for an update.

HI TIGEREYES 320. I’M A GREAT FAN OF MUTANT X. PARTICULARY LOVE WATCHING BRENNAN & SHALIMAR. YOUR MOTHER’S & FATHER’S WAS DELIGHTFUL TO READ. HAVE YOU STARTED WRITING ON THE SUBSEQUENT 10 CHAPTERS? IF YOU HAVEN’T COULD YOU PLEASE GIVE SHAL & BREN A HAPPY ENDING BY GIVING THEM A SON. WOULD BE INTERESTING TO READ ABOUT THEM TRYING TO COPE WITH AN INFANT WHOSE HALF FERAL & HALF ELEMENTAL DON’T YOU THINK? ANYWAY CAN’T WAIT TO READ THE REMAINING CHAPTERS. PLEASE WRITE SOON. CHEERS.

please... update !

I love the storie... i can't believe you gonna do this with us... you're torturing us... please i need to know how this going to end...

OMG!

ONce agian i love the story!

you have to finish soon!

i need to know who lainie is!

at first i thougt it was jesse and lexa by the way you described her appearence but then i think its bren and shal cuz of wat she learned. . .

so please finish the story!

dont make me cry!

you kinda confused me this chapter

didn't nick see sanctuary when he stayed there when shalimar was gone?

I don't i like the story so far

it really good

I'd just want to say how much i love this story and would love for it to be updated again, as it is too good not to be updated again.

I really love this story and would love for you to write more chapters for this story and get it completed as you have many 'fans' who also love this story. If you dont believe me look at your reviews lol.

Anyway i hope to see this story updated and would love to find out all the sectrets that havnt been told yet. aka whether Shal's baby is Brennans or not even though i have a funny feeling that it is lol.

Anyway thats all now lol.

Karen X

i have just finished reading this fic and i have to say it is brillant! i love the way you have brought the characters to life, Brennan and Shalimar are so cute together, you broke my heart when she broke up with him, i could feel their emotions through your words well done! the wedding was so heart warming i loved it! i really like where you are taking this story and cant wait to find out what happens next i hope you manage to update soon!

hey i have been reading this fanfic since it started im very happy of it its a great story keep it up

im very excited . im looking forward to the next chapter!

well see ya

that was great!

I'm so happy to see you updated! I didn't think you were going to finish this story and was so disappointed by that thought! Thank you so much for updating! This just gets more and more intriguing! I have suspicions, but can't wait to read more to find out! Thank you so much for the nice, long chapter!

so far the story is excellent but i have to say the ening of chapter 12