Shoot too bad you didn't continue this.T his was one of the better stories of the outsiders. I find funny how I don't seem to realize how out of character most stories have the greasers be until I read a good story where they are perfectly in character. It's sad but true :) and yours definetely reminded me of what the characters in the book were actually like. You did a great job, best of luck in all you do :)

~*~Princess Geta~*~

What's gonna happen next?

finieh it now!i defaintly drank batter yum yum

Hey, Ces! That's wonderful. I really like it. I love how you put everyday things in it. Is Nathan Hale High School a real school? That's so cool. I hope you write some more soon. It's really good!

Meghan(MegakaPonysgal)

I'm really liking this story. Its awesome, and I like the concept.

EXCELLENT! PLEASE update soon!

wow. sorry i haven't reviewed in a while, got kind of sidetracked. anyway, just read the last chapters. loved the jailhouse one, its now officially my fav chapter. and i liked this one too, soda is too funny! you write with a true air of hinton. i feel like i am actually reading the prequel. its awesome. its actually better than that. the writing is perfect, everyone is in character, and none of it is out of context or au. its wonderful. please update soon and keep up the amazing work.

I really like this. I like how you take events mentioned vaguely in the novel and expand on them. It's like the sequel to the Outsiders!

aw i love this story! lol soda in jail...haha i love it! aww sop much could happen...with pony and all!..well keep up the great work and update asap :D

well, I like Soda, but he was kind of a jerk in that chapter. he's knows that what he did could have caused his family serious trouble. he should have been sorry. Geez I wouldn't want to be Darry and have to put up with that crap. I'd go nuts.

Alyssa: Omigosh, those girl are so lucky... They got to see Two-Bit's boxers (Tee-hee!)
Soda: *is jealous*

This story rocks! PLEASE update soon! Two-Bit is so funny!

good chapter, hope you continue!

yes! I like this story a lot. every part with two-bit has been hilarious. the whole taking the pants off in class deal? yes, very original! i also liked the laxatives part...hehheh. this stories great! can't wait for the next part!

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