Lovely story. This is the second time I've read it. I went to ashwinder and read the final chapter this time, but the story is good either way.

Lol

More please

I’m not sure why you took down the last chapter. Your story is marked as M. As long as you gave warning that should have been enough. That’s what I’ve seen done with other stories. Anyways it was good up until this point, and I’m sure the rest would have been great.

I don't know what happened to the last chapter. its really not as graphic as I am sure everyone of us already have read on Fan fiction.
Thanks for sharing. its great in humour parts.

I don't read for smut - I know how sex works and don't need a manual - so cutting out the penis movements doesn't bother me a bit.

*pfft* Most writers leave the good stuff in anyway despite this site's addiction to bowing to their advertisers' ratings suggestions.

Ahhhh! I didn't want this one to end! Thank you for sharing.

Ha, I loved the side bet. Very sneaky ;)

I already know I love this story, before I finish over on Ashwinder. :)

liked it

loved this and headed over to find that last chapter!

chapter 6

I finished reading the other page.

that evil will not let you post here.

a sympathetic story.

I liked the character of Hermy :)

I love it. It was enjoyable. I really liked ch six.

This story was realistic and concise and all in all very humorous and well written.