Reviews for Hidden
Guest chapter 22 . 1/18
I feel like I can understand why this story was dropped. You started with a premise and it really just kind of ran away from you. Adding Astreia and making her just like him in absolutely no time only served to make him and his situation less special, as well as completely negating the relationship they had beforehand, which was a big driving force for them both at the time.

It's not really at all about humans trying to get Harry Potter back, it's about Gwyl and his various adventures as a semi-wolf. It is not at all what I thought I'd be reading after seeing your description, and that's a failure on you as a writer.

Overall a fun idea but poor execution.
Guest chapter 11 . 1/18
Love the story but the random ass obliviate out of nowhere was suppppppperrrrr forced and really just a dumb move.
ripper34 chapter 22 . 9/16/2019
Good story
Alex chapter 22 . 3/10/2019
This story is fantastic
TweakyGhostLover chapter 15 . 8/21/2017
YAY GO STRAY
YASSS SPIDERS
YASSSSSSS WOOOOOOOO
GO SPIDERS
TweakyGhostLover chapter 11 . 8/20/2017
TONKS
stray
BILL
SORRY BUT TONKS IS A PUFF
Awww stray
Awww she remembers
Awwwwww she knows he's there
Hahaha Harry
NO DO NOT POUNT IT AT HER DO NOT OBLIVIATE HER AHHHHH
Oh no DONT DO IT AGAIN
AHHHHHHHH
TweakyGhostLover chapter 10 . 8/20/2017
Awww
Lol go SILVER
Yasss diva
Yassssss Harry
GO DOG
YASSSSSSS GO SILVER
TweakyGhostLover chapter 9 . 8/20/2017
YASSSSS I KNEW IT WAS CHARLIE WEASLEY YASSSSS *previous chapter*
YASSSS HARRY
Oh no CHARLIE
I love how he doesn't even hesitate and just grabs the WEREWOLF
YASSS LEAPARDS GO CHARLIE
Lol Harry
GO HARRY
AYYE SILVER DOG lol Harry
TweakyGhostLover chapter 8 . 8/20/2017
YASSSS HARRY
GO Harry
AYE Aragon
GO SILVER
NO POOR WEREWOLF
GO HARRY YASSS GO WEREWOLF
YASSSSS HARRY
Lol just controls them
AYE GO Jed
YASSSS CHARLIE
TweakyGhostLover chapter 3 . 8/20/2017
GO DOG
AWESOME GO Harry I like Ve that he travels through the trees
kaisonsheart chapter 22 . 4/6/2017
well, my talent for finding old, abandoned stories seems to be strong as everthis is a very interesting view of a feral Harry, and I would love to see more. the initial fight with voldemort shows just how vast the gap is between having experience and having power. a good beta read would resolve nearly all of the grammar/spelling/ misused words and partial sentences. the later chapters do feel a bit...disconnected from the early ones though. like there is a chapter that was missed. or it could be intentional, a jarring change to both characters and readers. This is most definitely going on my favorites list, and maybe sometime in the future, it will be re-visited
Hunter of the Wild chapter 22 . 12/12/2016
What the actual fuck, it's been ALMOST A DECADE since this was updated and I'm so sad! It was fantastic while it lasted, so please continue
Guest chapter 22 . 11/7/2016
Great story please come back and finish it. Is stray is real mate because I'm confused about Tara or whatever her name is I mean is she trying to be is mate instead or what
kyuubijyuubi12 chapter 22 . 4/13/2016
UPDAATE!... Please?
pikachucat chapter 22 . 4/5/2016
awesome more please
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