| Reviews for Hidden |
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Guest chapter 22 . 1/18 I feel like I can understand why this story was dropped. You started with a premise and it really just kind of ran away from you. Adding Astreia and making her just like him in absolutely no time only served to make him and his situation less special, as well as completely negating the relationship they had beforehand, which was a big driving force for them both at the time. It's not really at all about humans trying to get Harry Potter back, it's about Gwyl and his various adventures as a semi-wolf. It is not at all what I thought I'd be reading after seeing your description, and that's a failure on you as a writer. Overall a fun idea but poor execution. |
Guest chapter 11 . 1/18 Love the story but the random ass obliviate out of nowhere was suppppppperrrrr forced and really just a dumb move. |
ripper34 chapter 22 . 9/16/2019 Good story |
Alex chapter 22 . 3/10/2019 This story is fantastic |
TweakyGhostLover chapter 15 . 8/21/2017 YAY GO STRAY YASSS SPIDERS YASSSSSSS WOOOOOOOO GO SPIDERS |
TweakyGhostLover chapter 11 . 8/20/2017 TONKS stray BILL SORRY BUT TONKS IS A PUFF Awww stray Awww she remembers Awwwwww she knows he's there Hahaha Harry NO DO NOT POUNT IT AT HER DO NOT OBLIVIATE HER AHHHHH Oh no DONT DO IT AGAIN AHHHHHHHH |
TweakyGhostLover chapter 10 . 8/20/2017 Awww Lol go SILVER Yasss diva Yassssss Harry GO DOG YASSSSSSS GO SILVER |
TweakyGhostLover chapter 9 . 8/20/2017 YASSSSS I KNEW IT WAS CHARLIE WEASLEY YASSSSS *previous chapter* YASSSS HARRY Oh no CHARLIE I love how he doesn't even hesitate and just grabs the WEREWOLF YASSS LEAPARDS GO CHARLIE Lol Harry GO HARRY AYYE SILVER DOG lol Harry |
TweakyGhostLover chapter 8 . 8/20/2017 YASSSS HARRY GO Harry AYE Aragon GO SILVER NO POOR WEREWOLF GO HARRY YASSS GO WEREWOLF YASSSSS HARRY Lol just controls them AYE GO Jed YASSSS CHARLIE |
TweakyGhostLover chapter 3 . 8/20/2017 GO DOG AWESOME GO Harry I like Ve that he travels through the trees |
kaisonsheart chapter 22 . 4/6/2017 well, my talent for finding old, abandoned stories seems to be strong as everthis is a very interesting view of a feral Harry, and I would love to see more. the initial fight with voldemort shows just how vast the gap is between having experience and having power. a good beta read would resolve nearly all of the grammar/spelling/ misused words and partial sentences. the later chapters do feel a bit...disconnected from the early ones though. like there is a chapter that was missed. or it could be intentional, a jarring change to both characters and readers. This is most definitely going on my favorites list, and maybe sometime in the future, it will be re-visited |
Hunter of the Wild chapter 22 . 12/12/2016 What the actual fuck, it's been ALMOST A DECADE since this was updated and I'm so sad! It was fantastic while it lasted, so please continue |
Guest chapter 22 . 11/7/2016 Great story please come back and finish it. Is stray is real mate because I'm confused about Tara or whatever her name is I mean is she trying to be is mate instead or what |
kyuubijyuubi12 chapter 22 . 4/13/2016 UPDAATE!... Please? |
pikachucat chapter 22 . 4/5/2016 awesome more please |