Reviews for Dark Betrayal
evanonymous chapter 10 . 6/22
...fuck that was painful to read through.
TheAssassinofIce chapter 4 . 4/8
Moron, Ginny isn't 18, she's 19! if harry is 20 then ginny is 19! because there is a ONE YEAR age difference! not a TWO year age difference!
TechnoGalen chapter 1 . 9/3/2018
Another idiot.
pikagrimreaper chapter 17 . 6/11/2018
Lol lemon drop coffin
sbmcneil chapter 3 . 10/7/2017
Its sad that Sirius didn't stand with his godson. You would think he, of all people, would have learned his lesson. I'm glad Harry has at least one person on his side.
Magical quail chapter 17 . 1/17/2017
Yay! Loved it!
Guest chapter 5 . 1/10/2017
I Hate Ginny with passion
Bronze chapter 4 . 1/19/2016
Though I doubt very much you're still reading reviews from this long dead story but here's this. What the hell else do you expect from Harry ?! The entire magical world of Britain if not the world turned against him! He should send a typed letter to that gossip rag the ministry owns and tell them " Don't call me when Voldamort come knocking on the door! One great act of betrayal deserves and begets another. My saving people thing died in Azkaban. Therefore you're on your own." Then tell the world EVERYTHING, and do mean everything Dumbledore has done to him since his parents died. Placing him with an abusive aunt, uncle and cousin, all his little death traps at school, failure to even bother to try and control his potion professor and making no attempt to control those children of known Death Eaters. And name him as his number one reason for not giving a damn.
phoebuscat chapter 17 . 11/23/2014
Hmm.. Very rushed and not very exciting, is it. Plus, you have the very annoying habit of switching your tenses in the middle of a sentence.
That said, I love the original idea you had for Voldie and Pansy... that would have been fun to read!
ToddGilliss chapter 9 . 10/8/2013
Type your review for this chapter here...
kyoshi711 chapter 8 . 7/27/2013
I've quit reading this story as it gets silly. Harry follows Dumby, when he should be cursing him and then he's going to explain what happened to Ginny. Christ is he still a 2 year old?
kyoshi711 chapter 7 . 7/27/2013
So Harry just pops in and saves Ginny and Dorkmort knows Ginny knows something. How?
kyoshi711 chapter 4 . 7/27/2013
If the owls could find Harry then surely so could everone else. Just follow the owls!
Guest chapter 17 . 11/8/2012
by his wish he was buried in coffin full of Lemon Drops

LOL hahhahahh LMFAO laughing my ass off at just one sentence one funny sentence
Entoarox chapter 17 . 10/21/2012
burried wahahahaha in wahahhaha lemondrop wahahahahahahahahahaaa!

of all the insane things for dumbles death, it had to be burried in lemondrops... wahahah!
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