Charming; highly engaging and just a little bit sexy

Oh..k i didn't get anything. It's grasping but it's very and i mean very confusing

that was strange...
But you do have an excellent writting style.

This was hard to follow at times Do you any way to separate the scenes? At first I was happy because I thought she kissed Harry and then they decided to cool it They decided to stay best friends Anyway good first time story

ah, at first I thought it was ron and was like "nnooooo"

Love this chapter!- who is it?

Eye luv it!

Ah! I love this story! For one terrible moment I thought the Someone Else was HARRY! I'm like, I DIDN'T SIGN UP FOR THIS!

And I absolutely adored your writing style. :)

-wc

I like it!

absolutely amazing! you really are a genius. it takes a great amount of skill and a mastery of the english language to successfully maneuver around a secret identity, particularly that on the secondary character. im not sure if you didn't separate the sections on purpose (it was a little confusing at first, but you get used to it), but by the end i thought it was a great touch. you have to differentiate in your own mind which character is talking in which scene to which person. I also think there was a great balance of outside characters, with the girls, and the balance with harry, ron, and malfoy is just perfect.

i'd love to read other writing like this from you. superb!

so tantalizing ... but i'm glad it was Draco, in the end

hehehehehehehehehehe...

-laughs maniacally-

IKNEWIT! HGDM *woot woot* hurrah hurrah

Loved it! Great work! And it was Draco all along.. for a second there I thought it may have been Harry lol... :)

I got confused but was able to piece them together.

Loved the ending.

How come malfoy likes her? this story was very good. I hope malfoy and her kiss some more