Reviews for Equilibrium
CalcBoy91 chapter 8 . 6/19/2013
I'd say keep going but I'm not sure if saying this 9 years after the last update will do anything.
Red Queen forever chapter 8 . 4/15/2008
ok, I've now read the whole fic so far and have to say it's awesome! You have done a really incredible job on this, it's fantastic. well done, keep writing.
ZionAngel chapter 8 . 4/10/2005
I would simply like to point out that you are now many times worse than me, Ry. You of all people should know what a feat that is.

**Shakes Fist** UPDATE YOUR FIC!
kristentrinitywannabe chapter 8 . 3/8/2005
OMG please you have to update this! or at least tell us how it ends! love the story - ONLY good one post-revolutions !
Fezzes chapter 8 . 1/23/2005
this story is my favourite of all the Matrix fanfics on here. I hope you'll continue this soon!

As some people already said, I wouldn't mind it either if Trinity and Neo had a child at some point, since I am sure that you are able to perfectly integrate it in a good plot!
Starlit jewel chapter 8 . 12/31/2004
Really good story! I found this story this morning at about 1:00 am and then I went to bed. So, I only just finished this story now, which is, wow what do you know? 1:00 am. Anyways, I don't like Continuity very much. I didn't like her when she first showed up. Oh, and when there's a scene change, it might be helpful to put something like * or something to show that there's a scene change. Otherwise, it's a wonderful story and I can't wait for the next update. It's very hard to find good stories that have Neo and Trinity coming back to life after Matrix Revolutions.
lily chapter 1 . 12/14/2004
PLEASE UPDATE! This is the best Matrix fanfic out there, in my opinion. If you have decided not to finish it, could you at least post for us how is was going to end? Of course, I'd much prefer that you finish it. THANKS for writing such a great story.
Meloaded chapter 1 . 10/5/2004
is there ever giong to be another chapter?

please write more of this story.

it is too good to be given up, just like that
JH Sounds chapter 1 . 9/23/2004
It's too bad I didn't get to read this sooner - the default display blocks out R-rated fics - but I am definately enjoying this.
Talio chapter 8 . 8/24/2004
I think it would be a huge shame if you did not continue this story. It moves seemlessly from where the Matrix Trilogy ends, expanding in a way that you start to forget just where one ended and the other began.

Keep writing.
Dana Trinity Briseis Scully chapter 8 . 7/12/2004
Hi! Well, I've been reading this fic for some time, and I must tell you how much I like it. It's really well written, one of the best Matrix fics I've ever seen. I really loved Trinity being promoted, she really deserved it and I am very curious to what those dreams Neo have been having mean. However, I do hope this turn to be a Trinity pregnancy in the last chapters, or even sooner, because I know, for what I've been reading that it would be really well written e you would turn it into a really good plot, not just another let's say..."brick on the wall". I hope you consider what I've told you. Oh... I almost forgot... that last part, with those FBI agents, where you mention a red headed... I remembered The X Files... which, in my opinion, is a really good think.
FalconWind chapter 8 . 6/19/2004
this is an excellent fic. You capture the feel of the matrix quite well, and the characters, I think, are spot on. Looking forward to the next chapters.
LiMiYa chapter 8 . 6/14/2004
Wow.

This is great! One of the best matrix stories I've read! Update soon!
Bagpipes5K chapter 8 . 6/9/2004
*sends hugs to Ryven* This keeps getting better with each update! The confrontation in the mall was well done; it flowed smoothly and I could see the action clearly in my mind. Rock on! :)
lily chapter 8 . 6/8/2004
Excellent Job! There are a few verb tense problems, but other than that, the writing is as good as always. I've seldom read an action sequence that was this easy to follow in print. More! More!
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