Great story!

I hope you writ some more stories centered around Neo and Trinity

now that is a perfect ending. Brilliant. I'm in awe of this, dude (or dutette, whichever :P )this is fantastic. LOVE the ending! that just blew me away. Just a sentance

Amazing how original all your story ideas are. Another great one!

I like this one, but then again Ilike most of your stories.

i wasnt sure, at first when i saw the summery when the story was first posted, but reading it now, i must say, how much i was mistaken.
i think it is a very, very well written story, and the plot is completely unique. i find it good to read a fic that is connected with what Sereph said, as i know that many didnt understand the meaning of that scene.
everything is completely in character, and that is quite empressive for such a unique fic. Neo and Trinity are completely believable, and so is the situation. i can just immagine that happening, if it were real (and here i have to once again remind myself...)
i cant really say much more than what your other reviewers have said, and they are right. keep on writing, although i dont usually go for the 1 chapter storys, the ones ive read that you've written are very well done, and dont have the problems that i see in other 1 chapter fics. and not to mention the longer ones youve written, like ultimate sacrifice. that is one of the best, most tear-jerking, brilliant story. and im sorry that i havent reviewed before (i will do a seperate review for ultimat sacrifice).
keep going...

Wow, I'm suprised I never reviewed this before! I love this fic, and I read it ages ago. Sorry.

Cool idea, I can just picture Neo and Trin doing this! I like how you describe it. And I can kinda feel the romantic tension without you having to actually specify it...well done, I liked this story.

That was excellent! Your fight sequence wasn't stilted, your characterisation for Trinity and Link were spot-on, and I've never read anything like it before. The link with the quote from Reloaded was a bonus. Thank you for this one good fic amongst the hundreds of crap ones on FFN.

Brilliant! I love it, very nice characterisation and believable reactions. I could actually hear and see the actors/characters from the movies doing exactly as you described, well done.

Write another please, I really admire the way you captured the characters.

Hey, whaddya know? I liked this story.

Alot.

Great stuff, plese write more Neo/Trin fics.

Oh! I love this fanfic! It's really unique and exciting to read.

Aww... so cute -

Trin/Neo is such a great couple -

Shall be redundant when saying that this is a good, well-executed concept. The fight brought out qualities of both Trinity and Neo that were certainly fascinating-Trinity's desire for a "sparring partner" (which suggests she might like Neo for combat reasons, besides physical reasons), Neo's overwhelming reluctancy to hit her but his not knowing his own strength, so to speak. Link's bafflement was great.

Great job! Interesting idea, too...it hasn't been done before.

I really liked the way you described everything and how you shed some light on a scenario that would prove to be quite interesting! I'll be looking for more of your stuff!

Jeez, and I thought your Stargate fics were great!

I loved this...you did a good job descriptively, and I (hopefully!) understood the meaning behind this story. I'm a TKD martial artist myself, and you/she/they were right, you do find out more about a person when you fight them...it's weird how much, sometimes.

Again, great job! :-