Hello.
That was just wow. A very deep insight in the Malfoy familiy, a strong characterisation of Narcissa. I never thought about Narcissa and Draco that way, but you drew a very fitting picture of both of them and their reasons.
Really nice work.
Silberfuchs

Subtle and beautiful, in the course of a single dinner and I think little can manage that and still make room for such a poignant piece. I really enjoyed it!

Lovely. Gotta say, though: I hate the summary. Made me almost not-read it (friendly suggestion: paste in one of your beautiful slyghtly poetic sentences instead - you've got a bunch of them to choose from:) ). Good thing I did read it anyway, cause it really is worth reading. Made me think twice about the relationship these two have. I think you nailed it. Made it really believable. All in all a really really lovely oneshot:)

You've really captured Draco and narsissa, that's how i ser them

No words can explain this.

I am moved to tears.

This was depressing and wonderful at the same time, a perfect sadness. I love the stories that portray Narcissa as a deep, loving mother. Good job.

-FlightOfFancy3

This was amazing. I am so interested in Draco and Narcissa's relationship, and you gave amazing...insight, it was touching and beautiful/

This is one of the most beautiful pieces in Harry Potter that I have ever read.

It touches my heart, tugs at some strings I never knew I had. I have never wanted to have kids but after reading this , found myself wondering about what kind of mother I would make. I was imagining sitting with my son till I caught the drift surprised.

Its so subtly tragic that I can not call it a tragedy. I have never been able to understand why every beautiful piece has an undercurrent of "tragedy" in it.

I was waiting till the end for Draco to speak up - at least one sentence to his mother. Wish someone could write this entire scene from Draco's POV.

Hope to see more of your work.

Lia

wow, that was amazing! very reflecitve and rewlistic, you really got inside her head!

That was good! Great emotion and characterization! Keep up the good work.

Great story!

that was great!

It was a really calm, mild piece with an undercurrent that blossomed and exploded and was just wow!ing at the end.

lovedd it!

That was a wonderfully written piece. It was deep, meditative, and beautiful. Something a mother would think for a son who had grown up without her guidance. It's really good.

Wow, that was really, really good! Very well written, epecially the end. Awsome story!