wow. Just read the whole story in one sitting. First fanfic I've read in awhile. I really enjoyed it. Some minor grammar and spelling here and there, but overall quite a good read. I look forward to reading the sequel later on. thanks for the fun read.

Wow, this story really made me teary-eyed. But I enjoyed reading it very much, there was so much emotion and interesting, often unexpected twists to the story. Besides, I think you are really good at portraying the different characters in detail and depth. (and I don't think anyone was OOC ;D )

I'm a bit disappointed that Ryo and Dee didn't get together again in the end, but I guess that's what the sequel is for. I'm definitely reading it as well :)

Thank you for this great story! Sorry, I'm not good at giving criticism, but I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed it. :P

i was rereading this story and liked it.I was also looking at your profile and notice you don't have A Time For Healing listed and was wondering if you could email me a copy of it . I also found out that Wildefyre took her page down and was wondering if there was a way I could read some of her stories again although its been a while.

I've come across that this is the story you take most pride in and I've got to say. it was just so wonderly... TERRIBLE! Not only do you think you're much better than anybody else but please... give us all a fucking break with you and you almighty shit how you're a trained writer and bla bla bla...

now that I'm done reading this first part...I have toadmit that I'm not sure what to say. I'm glad that you took your time and are taking such care for their reunion, but unlike Dee I'm not sure I'm ready to forgive Ryo for this one...I like Ryo but, sigh, I dont really know what im trying to say anymore...anyway I'm gonna go read the sequel now!

I cant seem to feel any emphaty towards Ryo right now. He dug his grave on this mess...he needs to feal with it now

Hey Irish!

I meant to write a review for all the chapters but my internet was acting up and it wouldnt let me...anyway before I go on I should warn you that this will probably be more of a rant than a review...I just need to let off some steam. Thus I apologize in advance if reading this was a waste of your time. You should also know that, because I was so into the story, I had a hard time turning off my computer, which in turn caused me to go to sleep at the early hours of the morning...

Anyway, about the story now-

In the first two chapters I was really shocked when Ryo said he wanted a wife. it was a " *gasp* oh no he didnt!" moment. I felt so hurt for Dee. How could Ryo claim to love Dee when he is planning his future without him?( I dont really remember what happened when and in what chapter so ill just go on) Then when Dee was painting and singing with his guitar...well that just totally broke my heart T.T I wanted to go and give him lots and lots of hugs. Dee says that he doesnt deserve Ryo because he is and angel. But to me Dee is the good one. He puts Ryo's feelings firs and is dealing with all of Ryo's selfishness and yet he still loves him. Yet Ryo won't even touch Dee. How could he say that they've made love when he is the only one receiving any? When Dee left Ryo (and by this time I was tearing up and blubbering like and idiot) I felt torn because i dint want them to break up but it was better for Dee because he shouldnt be in so much pain. At that time I wanted to slep Ryo so hard that it would knock him off his feet especially after he said that to Bikky. I mean wtf? He is hurting the two people that love him the most and yet he's acting like a victim!ArGH! Then he has the guts to cry to Dee about it! oh...because of my rambling I forgot to tell you how amazing I think Lyn and Andrew are. Does Andrew know about what happened between Lyn and Dee? Somehow I doubt it cuz I bet if he did he would be all over Dee thanking him and stuff. That's what I would do to the person who saved my love. There were more things I wanted to say Im sure but I forgot now...and this post is already pretty long so ill post in another chapter if I remember. Your story is beautiful. I just wanted to let you know that...oh and you also owe me like three boxes of kleenex... :P

Y'know, I pushed myself to read this far. Not push in a bad sense - I've been hooked and aching to finish - but it finally occurred to me, with your note at the end, that dang this was long! Being only 19 chapters (by the dropdown) was totally misleading.

But gosh, this was so worth it. You can count on me sapping up your sequel in the days to come! Excellent work!

Wow...something about Dee in this chapter really moved me. I can't say it, as there aren't words for it, but just...wow.

I added this story to my favorites list because it is well written, a good story and complete. I hated doing it because I hate seing Ryo and Dee broken up. But on the other hand, you not only did it for a good reason, you have good, well thought additional characters of your own that I like a lot. I sure hope you finished your sequal where they get back together so that I can also add it to my favorites (I refuse to add any unfished story to my favorites no matter how good it is.)

damn... this chapter really almost made me cry! *sobs* STUPID RYO! I'll read the rest later.. GREAT SO FAR!

love ur story need help writing my own though

Wow, I just read FAKE recently and you really have them incharacter though I don't think Ryo would be in so much denial. That really doesn't matter you wrote this so very well, it has the flavor of the manga but needed some lighter elements to be true to the manga and that doesn't matter because this is just a great story! I'm reading the sequel right away, I see it is not finished yet please keep writing and thank you for writing this. Umm I guess this is confusing but I liked your story a lot.

I am impressed and i enjoyed it alot. I would write more but you've already kept me up well past my bed time tsk tsk.

haha it was a great read.

good job, tomorrow night i tackle the sequal.

btw i admire that you were able to stick to this story for such a long period of time, many other writers would have given up...

Tyran.

Really enjoyed this story!

Though I'm hardly a fan of sequels, I will invest in reading yours because its more of a...split up story that a sequel. At least thats how it seems to me it would be. Well I really just want to get to reading that next story, so congrats on this one for keeping my interest and not going OOC crazy! :P -FG