Great! Loved the story. It was very enjoyable and not at all a waste of time. So I hope you will write other Human Target stories. I also like how you make C. Chance a badass.

I'm not familiar with the charicter, however your usual level of excalent story telling more than made up for this. One question, why do you have all your charicters *talking* to themselves? I feel that most of this "internal monolog" would be more efective if it were internal (writen as thought, rater than speach).

I had absolutly no idea who Christopher Chance was at the beginning of this story. Fortunatly you wrote it so well, it didn't matter. The plot was totally believable and the characters were real. And you always mamage to break up suspenfull scenes with a little humor (Captian Stupid Anti-Gravity Belt) so you're stories aren't too stressfull.