Oh wow. This is utterly refreshing. _ Tsuzuki and Hisoka from a third person's view... Beautiful.

I can't believed I haven't reviewed this story yet. *Slaps wrists* Bad Veleda.

This is wonderful. Touching and poignant, it moved me. Oh, and I loved Hisoka in this. You made him gentle but not OOC.

Hmm... That was cool!

The details you put inside the story was amazing.

It's nice to see Hisoka's gentler side as well... Not really ooc, just a different side of Hisoka. :)

Good job. I enjoyed that very much!

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i liked Hisoka's nice side in this even if it was out of character for him. you did a good job with the plot. where you didn't really know what was going on. it was hidden well. it was nicly written too. *smiles* good job.

You know, when I DID realise whose PoV it was, it just struck me how original it was. First, there's this whole detailed chunk of how he's late for school, then he meets Hisoka and finds out he's...well, dead. That was really, REALLY heart wrenching for me. I think it's a perfect piece _

A very fresh change of pace. Original point of view, and a good story. Keep going!

I like the way the story was written. Very proffesional-like (unlike what humble beings like me could ever churn out). Rather sad, but entertaining non-the-less, i still enjoyed it even though i'm more of a humour junkie.

I enjoyed your story immensely. This was very creative and I love your pacing and plotting of the fic. That was really really good! And I *cared* about the character, so when the revelation came it made me feel so bad for him. Good use of details too, so it makes perfect sense when I read it again. Adding this to my favorites list. Great job! I hope to see more of your work!

Very sad story. Very well-written. Wow, this really was a GREAT story! It's nice to see these kind of stories! _ there are so few of them and you did a lovely job on this one. It's nice to see the main characters on the "outside", if you know what I mean.

_ Love the work! That one-line almost made me cry. I wish I knew the name of the character of this story - but that just ruins the whole creative meaning, doesn't it? _ Hee hee, either way, I love this story.

KEEP UP THE WONDERFUL WORK!

Wow. I really liked it! An interesting POV from one of the souls that the shinigami come to 'save'. It is rather nice to see that not all deaths are brutal and mysterious eh? *smiles*

Mind you for the division of Tsuzuki and Hisoka, they always seem to deal with unnatural deaths and the like. I like how you turned a "normal" death into something poignant.

I hope you write more like this.