I know you said reviews were unnecessary. Still, I LOVED it!

Sorry, stopping here. You have the setup for a good story but it has 2 major flaws. 1) POV. You are trying to do a 3rd person limited but putting your Point of View in 3 character's heads at once. 2) Characterization. Early in the first season, we learned that Reed is aquaphobic. He's also uncomfortable around women and very formal when it comes to fraternization. So his interaction with Hoshi doesn't work and neither does his ease on the ferries nor certainly any love of surfing.

I loved this. I loved the interaction and the happy and just everything. Thanks for sharing.

I read this story on LD. I loved it then, and I love it now. The titles of the chapters were especially creative. Keep writing!

Great story!
I love the whole T'pol sleeping in the shirt thing... it reminds me of the episode where she tells the captian and trip about her grandmother that landed on earth... the part where she caresses the hand bag... i loved that... showed that T'pol did have some type f feelings, hidden but not totally.
Anyways.. are you gonna do more?

I know you say no reviews are necessary but you write so well. I love your stories. I like how you have Malcolm and Hoshi together. Please keep up the great stories. I always look forward to finding new stories that you have writen. Keep up the great work. All of your stories are great.

I loved this story, It was so sweet! I loved the teamwork through this story...maybe you could do sequel on malcolm and hoshi's relationship and T'pol's relationship with their new "family"

as a humble citizen of I hope you continue

ezri-c