I would've read this sooner if you would've broken this up into separate chapters. I'm one of those people who like to comment on each chapter as I read it.

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Chapter 1:

LOL! Giant Monkeys? Just couldn't be! I don't care what Lance said. lol! If there are Giant Monkeys, poor Twister!

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Chapte 2:

Hmm, thought so. Just two people in costumes.

*Wonders why they want to scare everyone*

Uh-oh, Big Ray is next for their pranks. lol

*Wonders what they're going to do to him*

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Chapter 3:

-The two monkeys grabbed Ray and gave him a wedgie and put him into the snow bank.-

Ouch!

-As soon as they said that, the giant monkeys came back and put Ray into baby clothes and started to feed Ray baby food.-

How the heck did they get them on him! How'd they get the diaper on! lol!

-Twister remarked “What a big baby! Haha! Do you need another didee?” he teased. Ray couldn’t answer because his mouth was taped up.-

Good thing his mouth was taped up, who knows what he would've retorted with. It's also a good thing that he's tied up too.

-Reggie said “Let’s leave him like this for the night! But let’s lock the doors up! They could be deadly!” Soon, the gang locked up all the doors and went to sleep.-

o_O Reggie? She said that? I was expecting Otto to say something like that. lol Poor Ray!

-It turned out that the victim was Twister.-

Aww, not Twister! ;_;

-AAron pulled the sheets off Twister and put a little bucket of water down his underwear and Laura put shaving cream on his hands and used a bird’s feather to put it on Twister. AAron took Twister’s hat with him. He put some fire ants on there and put the hat back on. He put some in the back of his pants too. Twister would be sore that’s for sure! With that, they fled out.-

Man, that's even more cruel than what they did to poor Ray! Harsh, but still a bit amusing.

-Twister “Should we leave Ray like this?” The gang eventually decided to leave him like this!-

*Still laughing over the fact that the kids voluntarily chooses to leave Ray like that*

-There, they were safe from the cops. Now, they started to shave Hillary’s hair off leaving her bald-

Okay, I take it back, I like the prank against her most so far! lol!

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Chapter 4:

-She stopped and looked at the monkeys, and seeing that the taller one was a male, she started raising her eyebrows at him in a sexy way.-

*Laughs over the fact that it doesn't work*

-"Let's untie her, and when she wakes up, convince her that she went crazy and did all this to herself, so we don't get in trouble and she looks like a moron," said Laura as she pulled the gag off of Hilary's face.-

ROFL!

-The taller monkey handcuffed Twister's wrist to Otto's ankle, and the shorter monkey handcuffed Otto's wrist to Twister's belt loop on his jeans, resulting in Otto being bent over Twister.-

That is /so/ WRONG! lol! So much innuendo for the way they were handcuffed.

-"I guess this is a bad time to tell you that my rash is starting to hurt," whispered Twister.

"What rash?" asked Otto.

"The one from the fire ants that the monkeys put in my pants," said Twister. He looked out at the crowd, who was now falling out of their seats and rolling on the ground, laughing.-

If I would've been in their situation, I would never show my face again.

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Chapter 5:

-Soon, Twister showed up at the front door to show what his rash to AAron His poor behind was all eaten up from the ants. It was a site to see. Reggie teased, “Aw, let mommy fix that for you little Twisty!” Twister was humiliated but only Reggie could put on the cream. Otto was just laughing at this. It reminded him of the time Reggie babysat Twister. Twister bawled like a baby when the cream was applied. It hurt bad! Otto also teased, “Aw does Twisty have a boo-boo?” Reggie told Sam to go with Otto while she’d take care of Twister. Twister was still crying from the pain and Reggie was there to hug him.-

Aww, cute, and creepy, at the same time. _ How come Reg /was/ the only one who could do it?

-Reggie checked Twister’s bag and put on his Shoompy Woopy bear pajamas for him.-

I thought Lars wore Shoompy Woopy Bear pajamas, but put Twister in a headlock when he started to say it, so Twister changed it to saying that he wore them.

-AAron saw the whole thing, and reluctantly put on the disguise again. He met up with Laura again at the cave. AAron said to Laura “ I feel really bad for Twister, because Reggie is treating him like a little baby. I mean she’s putting on his pajamas for him! If we’re going to do this, we have to stop picking on Twister!” Laura agreed-

I agree too! That poor kid has been through way too much. Besides, there's Sam and Otto to get now! _

-The monkeys were laughing as they were heating up the cauldron. It had hot chocolate in it, and it looked like it would burn really badly. It was set at 400 degrees. The larger monkey grabbed Shirley, and Shirley tried to fight back but it was no use, she was very closer to the cauldron... The smaller monkey screamed “Do it! Do it!”-

O_o

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Chapter 6:

-"BUST!" screamed the taller monkey as he held Shirley over the cauldron. Shirley's eyes grew wide as the monkey set her down on the floor. He untied her as the shorter monkey came up, and she put her hands on her hips.-

Oh, good. I was hoping they weren't planning on actually killing anyone.

-"Arggh," said Otto as he lied in the snow and watched the monkeys run back into the woods. He got up, and the nearby people started to laugh at him. "Friggin' monkeys!" muttered Otto. "They had to tar and feather me!" He picked up his board and headed back to the cabin, his face turning a crimson red.-

lol!

Ick, syrup and garbage! Yech! Well, they've finally gotten Reggie. They need to play a prank on Sam or Tito now. _

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Chapter 7:

ROFLMAO Otto's prank. He's stuck wearing Reggie's clothes!

-Otto had enough of it and started punching Twister. He couldn’t take the humiliation anymore.-

OUCH! First his painful rash, now he's getting beat down by his best bro!

O, Reggie will now know the identities of the Giant Monkeys!

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This entire story was funny. Nice prank on Sam. Simple and to the point.

Good job! _

Giant Monkeys? Now who would'a thunk it?

Well, it was..interesting..

Very good fic, AAron and Laura! Congratulations! There were parts where I could hardly stop laughing; poor Twister!

The whole fic is very funny, but the most hilarious part of it is when the giant monkeys pull pranks on Otto; they surely hit his ego hard! I can't imagine him covered with feathers! And getting ice cream down his pants must have been quite embarrasing! *laughs histerically until falling off the seat*

Gosh! This one is very good! Hope you can manage to create more stories soon!

Later!

Mike.