i know you wrote this ages ago but ive only just read it and it is really good! i love it!:D

Its a great story. loved how you showed that people can love someone thats not blood just like they are.

Pretty good. I don't really care for fanfic but this shit was good. You know they'd never put it on network TV though, right?;)

he should legally chane his name back to ryan i dont like brian wood its creepy

aww, very nice!

Wow, I think I remember this story... I really like the ending, though, even if my memory of the first seven chapters is wrong! Terrific job as always!

Jeez, they sure do take advantage of the poor kid. Very nice, I liked it. :)

Aw. Dawn's such a bitch. What a terrible mother. This is very good!

Excellent ending. It's so good to see Ryan back with the Cohens and trusting them again. I don't sleep well knowing there are fics out there where Ryan isn't rightfully ensconced with the Cohens. (hint, hint, you know how to make me sleep better at night - ignore romie, she's all bark, no bite!)

Ahh nice ending. Congrats, you finished it! I love your work, and I think you're an excellent writer. Keep it up!

Aw! That was the perfect ending. So sweet. I'm so glad that you decided to give some closure to this incredible story. Excellent job.

good good more more more soon please?

yay! oh this is such a good story, and you are doing so good with how ryan's reacting to all of this. keep up the good work and update soon please!

The thing that I enjoy most about this chapter is Seth. He seems genuinely concerned in a non-selfish way (which is a refreshing change from the Seth that has been gracing our screens recently). Another great addition to an already excellent story.

Wow, I cannot tell you how much I'm enjoying this story. It's one of the best OC fanfics I've ever seen! I'd love to have you join us at group/OCfanfiction