love it there is not many good adam and guy storys out here so write faster...lol you killing me by making me wait...

that was just beautiful. IMo, finally home is a bit better, but I just love this. Love it love it love it love it.

Hang on a sec, I must go put on my Clay CD...
Ah...that's better. "I Will Carry You" is now on repeat. God, I love this song.
Oh, Adam! Ohohohohohohoh! How horrible! What an awful, awful fate for him. The deal with the minor league team and suddenly...his wrist!
Stupid Guy for being such a deep sleeper...
And this, THIS: "His tears dropped onto his wrist..." just totally GOT to me. It cut right to the quick. Wow.
Oh. My. God.
GuynoAdamohmygod.
Yeah, THAT didn't make any sense, but that's what was running through my head as I read this.
Aw, Guy hasn't had any more images and he's happy...and he's feeling wonderful!...
He's WHAT? He's LAUGHING? I'm just as freaked out as Guy...aw...crying...poor Adam.
So Guy DID? And still managed to convince Dr. Gordon and...oh, Guy.
Aw, Adam&Guy!
Woohoo! for the universe!
Awesomeness,
R.S.
PS: SCREW STUDYING FOR FINALS!

THAT WAS SUCH A CUTE ENDING!

Great story. I can't wait for the next story! I am so happy to see your continuing.

Right then, that was bloddy brilliant. It's a shame about Adam's wrist though. Sorry if it's short but I'm absoluty knackered. great story. Keep it up!
NICE ONE!

yay!
i enjoyed that - weird pairing, but cool ne way
but y do u h8 charlie!

realisticly out.
enjoying this.
plz continue!

Ar that was lovely, I'm real glad that Guy's visited his parents. Int Adam lovely doing all that for Guy, but then again anyone would if they loved them enough. Keep it up, yeah. NICE ONE!

Another excellent chapter! AW...Guy and Adam, they're so cute! Keep it up!
-GINA

aw! that was so sweet of adam! *sigh* what a lovely boyfriend...now if i could attract one REMOTELY like him...i'd be happy D

I am soinlove with Clay Aiken.
And I told you that "I Will Carry You" is totally a Guy/Adam song.
And every sentence I write is going to begin with "Aw," okay?
Aw, Adam calling Guy's mom!
Aw, Guy and Adam interaction.
Aw, Guy stinks!
Aw, dinner with Guy's parents!
Aw, Adam playing hockey professionally!
Aw, Guy's little sister!
Aw, ohmygod, Adam talking to Guy's parents!
Aw, Adam not being sure.
Aw! "Adam blushed. Yes, he was taking care of him alright."
Aw! "What are you smiling about Banksie?"
Awesomeness,
R.S.

oh poor baby! this was an amazing chapter! i simply loved it!

I would like to take a moment to laugh my ass off at . I've been meaning to do it for quite a while now, but everytime I get to typing, I just forget. *Ahem* "It is extremely helpful to use this opportunity to comment on an aspect of the story that can be improved. A well rounded critique is often the most rewarding tool for the writer." Ahahahahahahaha!
I'm sorry, but...I don't know, it's just so CHEEZY!
But, okay, here we go, SuperSteph, here's what you can improve: More Dwayne. That's it. More Dwayne.
Aw! Adam's parents for caring!
Poor Guy! "You don't...think less of me, or anything, do you?" Aw!
Ohmygod, GUY! This is so heartbreaking!
"I'm-" Guy started
"Sorry," Adam finished. "I know. It's okay. You don't need to apologize anymore."
I LOVED THAT!
"I need time." So, yeah, I had a heart attack! But time together. Together. Good stuff.
Awesomeness,
R.S.

Ar that was so so so GOOD! *sniffs* and yet so sad! lol. Anyways keep it up!
NICE ONE!