| Reviews for The Cure to a Writer's Block |
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yuri plisetsky chapter 1 . 5/22/2016 Kakashi giggling and blushing?! this is a sight i must see! |
PerdidoKitsune chapter 3 . 1/9/2015 hahahahaha Kakashi is soooooo DEAD! I like it though but like Sasuke said be careful what you wish for neh |
My Solitude chapter 3 . 4/7/2014 Funny story. I kind of feel bad for Kakashi. xD |
YAOILUVRGRL chapter 3 . 10/17/2013 YAY! You turned Jiraiya into a yaoi fanboy! ROTFLMFAO! This was hilarious. I do feel a tad bit worried for Kakashi though... |
Iceheart15 chapter 3 . 11/26/2010 Hahahahaha! That was hilarious! Kakashi sounded just like those possessed fangirls too! Great story! |
7thtreasure chapter 3 . 9/6/2009 Hahahaha!This is one of the best horny but not too horny SasuNaru fics ever! |
7thtreasure chapter 2 . 9/6/2009 Your writing is better than expected!I mean that as a compliment, 'kay? |
7thtreasure chapter 1 . 9/6/2009 Hahahaha!Evil Kakashi!He's almost like a crazy psychopathic fan girl!Welcome to the fold sistah!Love the story line |
Mrs Hatake Itachi chapter 3 . 9/5/2009 Nice story! |
gaaranojutsu02 chapter 3 . 1/20/2009 THAT WAS SO FUCKING HOT! Kaka-sensei has turned Jiraiya into a SasuNaru fanboy XD |
Byakko Kitsunetsuki chapter 1 . 1/10/2009 Hello! I'd like to tell you that you have a very good idea of who Jiraiya and Kakashi are, Kakashi was a little OOC though. But I enjoyed him being a little uber enthusiastic! The plot already seems interesting enough, but be careful on default chapters, if they're too short and don't have much of a cliffhanger it won't catch many people's attention. I think what would have made your default chapter amazing would have been at the end you have a quick scene change, and have kakashi popping up to Naruto or Sasuke or maybe even both at the same time and saying he has a mission or something for them. That would have made me even more curious as to what Kakashi was planning. Also, you might want to watch out for little slips of spelling or speaking quotations, for example... "‘Hikaru-kun,’ Himiko gasped out loud and a blush spread on her pale cheeks as she felt the calloused hands against her tender skin…”" and "...The author is taking a break form this novel..." it should be 'from' not form. So yeah just be careful with those, I'm looking forward to reading your next chapter! |
sasodei-iz-awesome chapter 3 . 1/10/2009 ...XD Kakashi turned Jiraiya into a yaoi lover! XD Peace, love, and all that shit... ~Sasodeiizawesome~ |
Brie92 chapter 3 . 9/7/2008 XD ha! kakashi turned jariya into a sasunaru yaoi fan! |
Catrent chapter 3 . 8/8/2008 Hahah. that was a great ending! [ although i liked the entire story as well (á) ] thnx for writin this |
AnnieNonmouse chapter 2 . 2/23/2008 w-what? sasuke's NOT gay then? haha kakashi and jiraiya are like speechless! AWESOME! sasuke is a perv sasuke is a perv! lol it's true the more powerful the more perverted... think about orochimaru and of course jiraiya... YEESH! |