Wow! This is wonderful. It kept me in suspense until the end, wondering who the "he and she" were. The character voices were spot on and the use of imagery was perfect. Great job!

Wonderfully creepy, and had my heart in my throat while I read to see who it was going to be. Thank you. :)

Gah! That's just... You gave just the right amount of information for this to be very, very creepy. Well done!