This was excellent, far better than I expected from the author's note at the beginning. Usually when I encounter something written like that I assume the whole story will be in Leet speak and hit the back arrow as fast as possible but since this was on the favorite list of an author whose story I really liked and it was short I kept going and I'm glad I did. This was a really good use of an obscure minor character and one of the better first kiss stories I've seen recently. The small hint of hurt/comfort was appreciated too. My understanding is that the goke is the bowl the stones are kept in, not the stones themselves and that was distracting but it was the only flaw in an otherwise wonderful story.

Just 1 words...beutiful.I love it.

I really, really liked this, and the fact that you introduced an outside character to give us a clearer view of their relationship. ()

*Claps* Wonderful fic! Love the perspective, gives a more vivid description of Akira

Not bad. I love the ending! _

Haha, that was so sweet and it made me smile. I'm glad I read this fic, I had my physics final today and was depressed about it. After moping and sulking for a while and realizing I've wasted half the day doing so, I looked up some fanfiction and voila! Found your fic, it was wonderful, love the perspective of that anime-only character regarding Akira and Shindou. This was a very nice piece of writing

The dialogue structure was sometimes a bit too awkward, but the story was so cute! Love it!

Wai! This was cute - you had a fun style, though your dialogue formatting put me off just a bit. And the OC-who-wasn't-quite-an-OC was a very nice perspective. _

oh so kawaii a perfect story _

that. was. way. too. cute! it was so cute and so cool and so well-written and so fluffy and so- *runs out of breath*

anyway, that was a really really great fic! i hope you'll write another one like it soon! i was the best HnG fic ive read so far! it was so cool!

go stones think! AHAHAHA! okayy...crisis over, i will just leave you so u wont have to hear me ramble on...btw, the beginning wasnt rambling...i ramble.
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Very nice piece. I especially liked the Go imagery and how it is a two person game. I feel sorry for the child meijin, as he was a convenient plot device in the anime and manga. Shindou was right and I believe that Akira played him especially hard to make him go away. Loved the ending, m...Akira/Hikaru goodness.

Uwa~ that was so~ uwandafuru~ XD I loved it. Very interesting really... I like how you put it in 1st person of a minor character _ This is going to be a favorite story of mine now~

First story I've reviewed in like... a year? O_O wow... 'nyways, Great story

Brilliant fic! I think the point of view that you wrote in is good-it manages to bring out the character of Touya well. Good plot and characteristion!

I love this fic! Your language command is good and the way you portray things is mersmerising. Great fic!

wonderful! i love the description of black and white... light and darkness...

please keep up the great work!