very interesting!

well you had me and lost me for some of that fic, there were parts i liked and parts i didn't (not sure if smoking actually kills brian cells, although i know it's not so great for your lungs, not so sure hot topic is an established clothing chain in japan but i know a quick internet search can grab you something established in tokyo) however much of the narrative and insults were wonderful. and of course i had to smile at the ending. that was a damn good ending.

...Wow...Just, wow...The ending was certainly unexpected...And strange, but still, wow .

Wow...this was creepy. But so good to read! D

What happened to the real Omi though? Or has Nagi always been Omi...err...I'm confused. o.0;

Well, no matter. Still a pleasent read and a unique idea. _

Well this was...strange. I hadn't thought that it really was Nagi, though the idea did cross my mind. I thought perhaps it was a fifth schwartz agent that we don't know about because he's pretending to be a member of Weiss...but it wasn't.

Still good though. I particularly liked the brain-space commentary.

Dude, what a weird idea...

Really well written.

Hm... my internet wont log me on. But oh well. This was very original. I was seriously thinking that it was OMi till Schu said Nagi. Very original indeed. Loved every moment of it as well. Keep up the good work!

Oh very nice, lovely little twist at the end.