for god love

good

i like this part :

I just couldn't help it. She just looked so lost, sad and–

Beautiful?

why do you make kagura so pathatic

i GUESS it s a nice START

MOOOOOOOOOORE? I LOVED IT!

I LOVE IT! umm ik there is such a SLIM chance u will update, but could u plz update? haha!

could you continue?

I love this story, D

Please update soon ()

i love the story but it makes me sick...i'm sorry i love this story it just I hate when it mostly shows Tohru and kyo going all lovely on each other and i want to puke, i like that Kagura is changing along with Yuki but man i wish i could choke that stupid Tohru...i mean how can anyone be that dumb and selfish.

Um cool story it's just Tohru and Kyo that mostly piss me off or kills the mood.

um can you please make Kagura go to America, i know it sound wierd but look at from my point of view:

Until Yuki gets over Tohru, because Kagura will think it's because of Tohru rejecting him Kagura will suffer thinking she will always be number 2 never 1 so it would be better that she goes to America and change but before she leave it would be cool if she told Yuki to change and then she would come back and when they do come back Kagura change for the better along with Yuki because if Kagura stay with Yuki now it she would stay the same. Tohru would think she made everything right and i would get sick sometime. that girl Tohru need to think everyone problem are her god she need to stop sticking her nose into everyone busy and let someone else sort it out

oops but i love the story it's just a tip plz update soon

AUGH! I"M IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY! UPDATE PLEASE! )

wow! great fic! i hope this gets updated...

Wow the story's great. (this is my first time reading a Yuki and Kagura centered story) Update :(.

I think that it would be interesting to read if Kyo decided to duke it out with Yuki, asking him why 'mr. perfect' is purposely trying to take away others happiness, along with other things. Yuki then'll walk away muttering to himself. Kagura... confused, might follow him and see Yuki off guard before you can really understand each other though, his mask is put back in place. But then Akito decides to go to the balcony...

Hope I wasn't too mean by suggesting some ideas .

Love it! Please keep writing!

I hate Tohru!