Nah, I like it because theres no any time era just like in the movies. Very, very good.

Really enjoy reading your short short stories on Lord of the Rings! Its really interesting to read a story purely from one character's point of view, especially Frodo's. Keep it up! I've suscribed :)

Improvements:

-Write your stories more in the style of the time era in which the original book was written, that way, the actions of the characters make more sense.

I think I have read this 5 times, and each time it gets better and better!

This is very good. I am putting this in my c2.

I loved this chappy! Legolas is a very good friend to have all the time.

I hope they can help Frodo!

Smiles and hugs you again. There should be more stories about Boromir and Frodo's friendship. We don't get to see it often and it's nice to be able too.

I love Boromir and Pippin. This is really cute on the both of them. :) Smiles and gives you a big hug thank you!

I think I know why Frodo's being mean to Aragorn right now.

I like how Legolas tries to comfort Aragorn. They all need a friend to share their pain with.

This is very good so far. I will keep reading and reviewing each chapter.

Well done...hope you continue writing.
Weemoggie

*sniff* That was great!

Aw! What a sweet story. And poor Aragorn, nearly trapped by Pippin's eyes! It's so nice to read a "happy ending".

CUte ending. fluffy and hobbity. i like it