Reviews for Dance With the Stars
Estel la Rodeuse chapter 12 . 11/21/2016
I loved this story all the other times I read it. And I still love it, although many years have gone by. You write beautifully, I love love love love your portrayal of the handmaidens. It has influenced my own (scarce) writing about them.
I love how you explored the idea of the decoy queen being Padmé's own sister (it makes sense) and their different temperaments. Anyhow, this will stay one of my favourite fanfics.

(as I've already review the last chapter, I had to post my review on this one)
Guest chapter 4 . 1/22/2016
I can't understand why this story has so few reviews! This is my second time through, and I love it so much! The character development, the plot, the likability of Sabé even though she's flawed and a little brat sometimes... I love it all! Thank you for such a good read.
Estel la Rodeuse chapter 13 . 1/5/2016
I've just reread this fic after many years and I have to say it's still a joy to read. I loved the idea of the twin sisters, the whole family dynamics. I especially loved how you portrayed each and every handmaiden. I loved their little fights and love. Sabé's character was also interesting (and very similar to mine at moments!) I loved how things were subtle and everything about it.. It's a very good piece of writing. I probably read it first when you published it but I have to say that the story has almost become canon in my mind. Truly briliant. I can't see it otherwise. And, it's well written. Thank you so much for this story. I always loved your story!
ZabuzasGirl chapter 1 . 12/3/2013
Update immediately, please!
Annie chapter 13 . 5/11/2011
I just found this story. Awesome story.
JJ Rust chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
Jazzcat recommended you to me when it comes to a FF writer that excels at character development. She was right. Great story. You did a brilliant job in creating Sabe and showing off all her strengths and flaws, and also giving the reader a glimpse into the royal family of Naboo. The interaction between everyone felt believable, the dialogue sounded natural, and I really enjoyed learning about Sabe.

A couple typos I caught: "You won't so cheerful" should be "You won't be so cheerful"

"proud mother's" should be "proud mothers"

You are an excellent writer. I look forward to reading more.
Allendra chapter 13 . 7/4/2010
Wonderful story! Sorry I didn't review for the last few, but I've been really busy lately! I may go back and do so. :) Anyway, I'm off to read the sequel! You write brilliantly and have great characters!
Allendra chapter 9 . 6/29/2010
Not much to say except for another great chapter!
Allendra chapter 8 . 6/29/2010
Another great chapter! You write gungan dialogue very well.
Allendra chapter 7 . 6/29/2010
Definitely enjoyed the chapter! I loved the inclusion of Dexter. The fight between Padme and Sabe was shocking, but certainly felt right with their characters and emotions at the time. Well-written,as usual. :)
Allendra chapter 6 . 6/29/2010
Another great chapter!
Allendra chapter 5 . 6/29/2010
Great work! Usually when a fanfic turns from its plot to a scene directly from the movie, it loses it's . . . fanfic-ness, lol. But you did perfect at still making it feel like the story and keeping it centered on Sabe. Looking forward to more!
Allendra chapter 4 . 6/28/2010
Excellent chapter!
Allendra chapter 3 . 6/28/2010
Very good. :) A bit slow, but still enjoyable.
Allendra chapter 2 . 6/28/2010
Very sad. :( Hearing the title being spoken in this chapter definitely made it stand out. I have a feeling the forget-me-not will be important later in this story.
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