Good dialogue - in character and well observed.

This is very cute.

I love this story, I can so see Alex & Bobby arguing like this. I'm also Australian (I live in Brisbane) and it is great to see a fellow Aussie author - and our spelling!

Cute. And funny. I loved the last line.

This was such a cute story. And it does sound like something Bobby would do because, well, he's Bobby. Great job.

ADORABLE fic! :) I loved it. Keep up the great fics. The characterizations were perfect. :) I just loved it. he he he

w00t. this fic is cool! kinda embarrassing situation for Goren! the smile thing is very sweet.

very...um...interesting! I liked it. Very cute!

It sucked so badly. I have no idea how you could have posted this type of story to your screenname. I've come to expect more from you, Tracy.

P.O.'ed at me now? Blame it on IMing with you before you left. That's my way of getting revenge and yes, I know that revenge is a dish best cold and that I should watch my back.

True review: It was very cute, very sweet. And Goren and Eames like.

That was so sweet - and so in character with both of them. And how sad is it that Goren needs a pic of her from vice just to see a real smile from her? sniff. He needs to make her smile more often ;). Yet another wonderful story from you and I expect more (and for CSI and SVU hint hint).

that was so sweet! :)

Hey, this is a cute beginning. That was really sweet how you made Goren keep the pic for her smile. Continue the story if you can!

I really enjoyed this fic. Beautiful, your characterisations were perfect, which made it a very enjoyable read.

The conclusion was great, i like the reason why he wanted to keep the item... very Goren-like.

Thankyou for this read.

Regards

Kahlia.

Very cute :)