The grammar in the first few chapters is very... off. The characters don't sport their usual speech patterns. Good start, but could use editing.

I absolutely adore this story and would like to know if you are going to continue this story.

Donovan? Zack's last name is Fair

This is probably one of the best Final Fantasy fanfiction story ever!

WHAT I LIKE ABOUT THIS STORY:

Cloud Strife as a female character and leader.
It would of been amazing if Cloud had actually been a girl/woman in the video games and films.

Vincent Valentine as Sephiroth's biological father.
Sephiroth looks a lot like Vincent (they have similar facial features).
"Supposedly" Hojo is Sephiroth's father (according to sites), but in my mind Lucrecia was already pregnant with Sephiroth when she left Vincent to be with Hojo.

Zack being alive.
He's one on my favorite characters and I cried a little during his death scene, so I'm glad that you didn't kill him off.

"The Remnant" brothers being Cloud and Sephiroth's biological children.
Despite how bad Kadaj, Yazoo & Loz were in canon, I still felt sorry for them.

Cloud & Sephiroth being Nordic gods.

OTHER THOUGHTS:

I don't like Vincent and Yuffie being a couple.
I do like Yuffie's character BUT I feel like she's too immature for Vincent.
Maybe they'd be better together when she "grows up".

I wish Snow from Final Fantasy XIII was in this story.
I really like him and think his character would of been better suited for the seventh installment instead.

I wish Genesis had been a better character.

I got lost within the plot after the 60th chapter.
Don't like the crossovers.

did you know that there are pieces of text missing? some words here and there and your headers on the start and end of the chapter are nearly completely gone.

finally ch 60, it's a really long journey to reach this chapter since i read it with my phone. The writting's so small that my eyes hurt, but it's worth it.
It's a surprise to find Gackt in this fic, he had a funny character too. I love him not romanticaly since it would be... (what is the term for 'reversed phedophile'?) THAT, hha...

Are you aware this story is being posted on another site under the author Mikage? see link http: ?sid974

44. S4:5: The Wakening - End

"Dude, I know right! Vincent is HOT!"

So beautiful that makes me want to cry, the ups and downs...Keep on writing, you do good

I love you. Really I do. Rtd is one of my two all time favorite stories. One is really long, and complete. But it got deleted. This one, is really long, incomplete, and I have been waiting 2 years. No I haven't forgotten. So please update... please.
Besides the fact that this story is awesome( the serendipity arc is a bit confusing though), you're grammar is a lot better. Hope your enjoying your summer vacation. I mean... it is in Florida. So. Yeah.

LOVE IT!Only took me I think 2 and a half days to read. I hope to see more of it soon.

:)

This is such a GREAT fanfiction. I hope you update this soon. I can't wait to see what happens next for the characters. I also can't to see how things go for Sora. Please update soon. I really like this.

omg i was crying at thise chapter they way they treated poor Sephiroth and his beautiful hair thats his trademark his knee legnth hair *grabs Sephiroth plushie hugging it close *i wanna give the real Sephy a big hug and kiss now

Cool. I like this. :)