Definately a winner but hey you haven't updated your stories forever come on finih the Legolas ones

This was just, just awesome! The rhym, the flow...everything went perfectly, although I kinda saw an elf as one who would speak such a prayer, and a prayer it did seem thus to me.

Oh...that's really cool! It really captures the whole essance of LotR, I think. I like how effortlessly you seem to work everything in. The words flow so prettily! And the mix of darkness and hope is great, too. It sounds like it should be the prologue for the book, or something said in Lorien by Galadriel's mirror. Truly beautiful!

You're just amazing at poetry, you know that? You should write a few fics with loads of poetry in them, written by you of course! Because only you could carry it of!

I liked it. I think this one sounds more elvish than "I Wish", actually.

*sniff* that made me feel really sad. oh well i'm about to go on a sugar high and my favorit song is on so i'm cheering up.

i really liked that one... i thought it was better than ur last one actually... very good!

oh thats so aww!

Sad yet hopeful, me likes it loads!

ops went a bit Gollum-ee a bit there lol talk 2 u soon hun!

-Lizzie x

Yey! Me likes much!

Du vee lai nie estaldo?-don't ask. Inside joke. Yes, I'm american.

I loved 'I Wish' and I just happened to find this in the Just In section (talk about fate lol). Wow...this was so beautifully sad. Your poems flow so gorgeously and the words are so vivid. Ok, hope I don't sound too much like an English teacher you've had...:) It was great, you are very talented with your rhythmic poems.

i think it was really a beautiful poem that identified several of the things faced in the lord of the rings trillagy.