Reviews for The Ladies Or The Loot
BlackRevenant chapter 21 . 11/19/2013
Oops.

I said 21

Not 20.

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BlackRevenant chapter 20 . 11/19/2013
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Final.

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BlackRevenant chapter 19 . 11/19/2013
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Two

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BlackRevenant chapter 18 . 11/19/2013
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BlackRevenant chapter 17 . 11/19/2013
Wow.

Everything was going geeat till this chapter.

Pissed me off so much I dont wanna finish.

In fact I wont, hate hate HATE being forced to do anything. Period.

I'm that special brand of idiot/stubborn that would choose a bullet over giving up my wallet.

Tenchi ain't built that way I know it, but I'll be damned if some bastard on a power trip was gonna make me do anything before I was damn well ready.

Gonna review the last fee chapters cause I said I would.

And a man is worth only as much as his word.

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BlackRevenant chapter 16 . 11/18/2013
For as much as I dislike Ayeka this was a good chapter.

A change of pace from the pure crazy that is most of the girls.

Ayeka offers something similar to what Kiyone does.

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BlackRevenant chapter 15 . 11/18/2013
Ah Sasami's chapter was good by being so conservative.

16 sue may look but 13 she be. The opposite of a fake loli.

Marco is about to bring the wrath of God down on his head.

And probably a few Goddess' too.

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BlackRevenant chapter 14 . 11/18/2013
Oh man.

By the end of this one easily my favorite so far.

Mihoshi was already of my favorites for reasons I pointed out last review. Much like Ryoko she's really pure in her feelings. Pure doesn't have to mean innocent, just real with her desires. Makes me sad how she often gets thrown to the way side.

Not so much here. She really shined this chapter, hell in this entire story so far.

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BlackRevenant chapter 13 . 11/18/2013
Oh the ups and downs of this chapter.

Ryoko is my favorite because of her passion and fire. Its a gift and a curse to be so as you've shown.

I dont like Ayeka for the same reasons Tsundere types annoy me. I'm all for feelings, good or ill, hiding behind false anger or pride.

What a finish to Ryoko's day.

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BlackRevenant chapter 12 . 11/17/2013
This was a good chapter.

Had to fight through it myself though.

Not for any fault of your own.

I just literally give no fucks about Kiyone.

She great and all, but there are other characters I want to see more, dying for Ryoko and Mihoshi to take their turns.

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BlackRevenant chapter 11 . 11/17/2013
Damn didnt get the fluff I wanted till near the end of this chapter.

Interesting take on Yosho and Misaki. How many warriors of old got felled because they were without their weapon of choice. I mean as a swordsman you seek that oneness with your blade, but you shouldnt neglect everything else in said search.

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BlackRevenant chapter 10 . 11/17/2013
Man the length of this chapter was murder.

Wondering if those two Noble sons are off to challenge Tenchi, they have no idea who they are fucking with.

Ryoko and Ayeka, wow. I can see Ryoko being pissed for those reasons too. Washu had a point but so did Ryoko.

Dates next chapter!

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BlackRevenant chapter 9 . 11/17/2013
Goddammit Marco is a bastard!

Misaki getting her own treatment by Sasami was golden!

So so on the robbery. Sure the ladies act really childish sometimes but Kiyone really is unconsciously moving in on their territory.

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BlackRevenant chapter 8 . 11/16/2013
A little slow this chapter.

But its setting up the dates which I'm looking forward to.

The little insight into the Jeriaian Royalty was cool though. Three parts of the same whole.

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BlackRevenant chapter 7 . 11/16/2013
Oh so far tuis was my favorite chapter.

The fight eith Ryoko and Ayeka while true to character annoyed the hell outta me.

Probably why Ayeka is one of my least favorite. Her personality can be grating.

Washu for similar reasons. 20k years can soften anyone up, but damn I wish uer seriousness would show up more often.

But that minor gripe aside, deliciously fluffy chapter man.

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