ERMAGERDERMAGERDERMAGERD! LUV IT! YOU SHOULD TRY WRITING A DRARRY. ITD BE GOOD. crap. caps lock was on.

good job

So, I'm trying to figure out how it is I've never left a review for this. I love this story! For your first lemon, it's hot and yummy and awesome and you can barely tell you're inexperienced with it. I've read this a hundred times, I know how it goes, and yet it never fails to pull a blush from me, so a very good job with this. :)

adorable and cute and... and... ADORABLE! cant describe it any other way :)

Wow that was great! Especially for your first lemon Great job

And i just finished reading this r-18 rikuxsora doujinshi ''my best friend is santa!'' by crown,

srsly. I was mentally squealing and n0sebleeding.

Awesome story.

Atleast u can write. I suck at words, meaning n0t go0d writing fanfics.

Ur friggn talented!

Lo0king f0rward to reading ur other stories!

Wow, this was perfect, pure genius

Kudos im impressed keep up the awesome stories

That was...just...wow.

I have no words. It was perfect.

Very well written! GREAT describtion on the emotions! Loved this story!

OMG XD

Lik- no I LOVE IT :D

it's amazing one, so sweet..it's emotional and.. uhgg

I can't say anything. it's so good!

I love the emotion in this story. Even at 14 you still show huge emotional maturity and considering you are older now I cannot wait to read more of your writing. I love Sora X Riku. I have only recently completed KH2 and now know the story of Riku and the darkness. When Sora threw himself down at Riku's feet, I cried, cause I could see the love. I also see the same thing here. It is as if they are real, ya know. It is good to see such beautiful writing. I hope you can write for years to come. I'll still read them. :)

O...M...F...GOD! best yaoi ever thnk u :)

That was aaaaaaaaaaamazing! Love that pairing. You're a fantastic author.

good story

Yum yum yum yum YUM ;)