| Reviews for Domestic Disturbance |
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   blakefootball chapter 24 . 7/8/2008 wow :[] scary i read the whole thing it is pretty scary at the end(of this chapter)but i like it. and cool you're in band too. i play flute in my and i am not too bad... maybe. well TTFN! |
| RedCurls121 chapter 24 . 2/21/2008 okay, two years have gone by, and you havent gotten any nice reviews apparently! DANGIT! Why such a friggen cliffhanger? WHY! |
| RedCurls121 chapter 14 . 2/19/2008 I must say, your writing quality might not be very good; but you sure write hilarious stuff at the end of each chapter! -Riley- |
| RedCurls121 chapter 8 . 2/19/2008 Not to be mean: you need to give Misty some bad characteristics. every holes story ive ever read, the girl is a 'bad' girl, but she has no 'uncommon' flaws. its all the same, typical characteristics. sorry( -Riley- |
| RedCurls121 chapter 7 . 2/19/2008 I like where your going, and i know you havent updated or anything in forever, and i dont want to be mean, but this story is pretty much your typical Mary-sue. You went into everything too fast. But whatever, your point is good. -Riley- |
| shinigami109 chapter 24 . 10/8/2007 woot! plz update soon! |
| powderedsugar chapter 24 . 9/4/2007 it was a little cliche but nothing i can't handle! please update soon! |
| nina-luvs-mnms chapter 23 . 9/12/2006 its rly rly good plz update soon |
| pixie-lover163 chapter 24 . 9/4/2006 this has to be the best story i have ever read |
| gingermoon78 chapter 24 . 7/2/2006 hey this is relly good and im dying to know what happens next so please post more |
| Lt-Spork89 chapter 24 . 7/1/2006 Nice saving tactic! Way fun! I would love to read some more! |
| jgsparks chapter 24 . 6/29/2006 update update please! |
| LeMoNsOuR chapter 1 . 6/27/2006 Omg... there are so many stories about girls going to Camp greenlake because they got kicked out of "something". so they decided to send her to a juvenile delinquent camp for boys as PUNISHMENT? I like Zigzag in this story. He's so retarded in a cute way. I felt bad for her in chapter 2. She isn't used to so little water. Poor thing. But Pendanski is supposed to be a nice person in character... in the book, and in the movie, but the Disney version made him look quite sinister. Is there something about Misty and men? I mean- she'd been beat up by guys, got addicted to drugs because of guys, got suicidal because of guys, got sent to Greenlake all at the fault of guys... omg. O.o Chapter 4 was rerally interesting, about the treasure and everything. I'm almost out of time and I hope to read more of it tomorrow. |
| Tempered-Poenix chapter 24 . 5/27/2006 LOVE IT! |
| narutorules03 chapter 24 . 5/26/2006 It was very..er... graphic. |
