Reviews for A Cousin's Betrayal
ADDAMSFAMILYTREE chapter 1 . 8/27/2015
So far so good, for a start. Ever think of writing crossover stories? If not, it's something to keep in mind. For example, how about if the semi truck for Bo's racing team needs major repairs, and they need to get to Daytona to make the time trials for a big race. Thereby, Luke's old pal from Vietnam days, namely B.J. (Billie Joe) McKay manages to get them there in time. However, this is the same B.J. McKay of the TV classic "B.J. & THE BEAR".
ADDAMSFAMILYTREE chapter 2 . 8/27/2015
Really spine tingling chapter. Still, I often remember various episodes in which Luke recalled his days in the U.S. Marines, and seeing as how the character of Rick from the TV classic "SIMON & SIMON" recalled being a U.S. Marine in 'Nam, and if Rick together with little brother A.J. track a kidnapping suspect with kidnapping victim in tow to Hazzard, Rick calls on Luke, Bo, Daisy, Coy, Vance, and Uncle Jesse to help in the search, alongside of Enos and Cletus. So, since the kidnapper in question resembles Rosco, well, this does makes things a bit sticky, except that Rosco's Basset hound Flash helps to solve the mystery as well.
ADDAMSFAMILYTREE chapter 3 . 8/27/2015
Burn wounds gotten from a barn fire? Sounds kind of like "THE TOWERING INFERNO". Ofcourse, any crossover with "THE TOWERING INFERNO" may be batty at times. However, try a crossover between "THE DUKES OF HAZZARD" and "T.J. HOOKER", wherein Hooker reunites with Luke whom he befriended in Vietnam.
ADDAMSFAMILYTREE chapter 4 . 8/27/2015
Gotta be the saddest of the chapters by far. Still , no ideas for any crossovers? Try, for example, the idea of a battle over the arrest of a suspect, resulting in Rosco tangling with Captain Cain of Bishop County in a crossover between "THE DUKES OF HAZZARD" and "B.J. & THE BEAR"? LOL! At least, it's a thought to keep in mind.
ADDAMSFAMILYTREE chapter 5 . 8/27/2015
One sizzling, hot chapter so far. If, no ideas for crossover possibilities have surfaced yet, try arranging for the VFW group, to which Archie Bunker belongs, visits Hazzard County on a camping trip, and the whole VFW group winds up in jail, except for Archie who manages to slip away, and finds refuge with the Dukes.
ADDAMSFAMILYTREE chapter 6 . 8/27/2015
FAR OUT! Also, it's good reading. However, keep in mind, that crossover stories make for good reading as well. Now, one good crossover possibility would a crossover between "THE DUKES OF HAZZARD" and possibly say, "DIFF'RENT STROKES". I for one can imagine Willis learning some of the Harlem based slang to Rosco, Enos, and Cletus. Better yet, Bo & Luke, or maybe Coy & Vance, lifting Arnold through the windows of General Lee. Even Daisy would show Kimberly some good fashion ideas to popularize at The Eastland Academy. Besides, Hazzard County Postmistress, Emma Tizdale may be a first cousin to the Drummonds housekeeper Adelaide Brubaker; unless you never noticed the resemblance between the two of them?
ADDAMSFAMILYTREE chapter 7 . 8/27/2015
This is quite interesting. Although, crossovers make for good reading, too. For example, supposing
Enos or Cletus wind up arresting a wanted fugitive from New York, resulting in visit from 12TH Precinct personnel that include Detectives Stanley "Wojo" Wojihoweicz, Ron Harris, and Arthur Dietrich as well as Officer Carl E. Levitt.
ADDAMSFAMILYTREE chapter 8 . 8/27/2015
Sounds like a most interesting story. Ever think of writing a crossover? If not, well, explore all the possibilities, such as a crossover between "THE DUKES OF HAZZARD" and "IRONSIDE".
Acer83 chapter 8 . 8/25/2012
I like this update soon.
daisyduke80 chapter 8 . 12/17/2005
up date soon! also don't make luke go to jail.
jeanne chapter 8 . 9/28/2005
Really like your story. Any chance of more to come. Like did they prove luke innocents at the trail. Did they catch the real culprit.
Anonymous chapter 1 . 3/1/2005
Some grammar mistakes but good. Keep it up
Kitttie chapter 8 . 2/4/2005
very good story. Please update soon.
j chapter 8 . 1/4/2005
this so far really good story. Please tell us how it ends.
Beth Smith chapter 8 . 1/1/2005
*sighs with relief* Bo forgave him! Which...it's kinda sad, because Luke's in jail, now! Aww! Update soon!
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