Haha... wow, guess you're not working on this anymore huh? Almost two years... Well it's very good! The paragraph about being under Malik's control was excellent. It never occurred to me that that would bother Jou more than being attacked by Ra, but you're absolutely right... absolutely right... Good job _.

Those are fun _. Hrm. Yes. Good job. Yeah, Seto would really hate those, wouldn't he? Very good job. Onto the next one.

There once was A boy named Calvin.

He loved to even read 7,0 minutes in

his reading A girl named Erica

got ahead of he got back

back I forgot to minchen

one night he read 7 hours.

Heehee, Malik's a nutjob... and naming the dog Kaiba... *sighs* Such good ideas. It liked this bit of the story quite a lot, it seemed very Jou except I though he was swearing a little much. But then again I supposed he was getting riled so that gives him a good plausible excuse. Gah, I'm going to start ranting soon, so I'll just syay excellent job and maybe give Ryou a whack next! (I really did not mean for that to sound so wrong... .

M... very Kaiba-like. To me, arguing seems like his only hobby, so arguing with himself when there's nothing else to do seemed quite natural. The bit about blue... mmpf, I've often wondered if that ever goes through his head. Good fic so far! *thumbs up*

THE RABBITE

Mina: That was good.
Kaiya: Yup.
Mina: I hope you write more. Gotta go! Update soon! Ja!

wow. that was really good. *snickers* poor seto, i think he was starting to go a little crazy near the end. i think that wud be a fun assignment. _

*depants Jou* Sorry I just had to do that...
Okay anyway, again super creative! This is awesome! I think you really got Jou's character! Great!

_ That was really cool! It was such an original idea, I should try that sometime...
Anyway yeah, that's Seto to a T! Awesome! I'm glad you decided to continue! Off to the realm of Jounouchi! This should prove to be quite interesting...

::quirks eyebrow:: I like this story. Because when people have assignments like these, they usually end up spewing their bottled-up feelings, any hurt, anger, rejection... or rants about Seto. _

~DSF~

I really think that this is a very interesting idea and I like how you have a lot of pschological aspects in your story. I think it would be great if you did someone with a yami next, maybe Malik or Bakura where it'd be funny if they kept fighting over who got to write so they kept switching back and forth. I don't know though, that might be kinda hard. Okay enough of my random thoughts and babbling.

Keep writing and I expect an update soon!

I like Jounouchi! So cute! And that almsot is Joewy esque. You forgot some of his common catchphrases

And worse grammer

Maelgwyn

*claps* I really enjoyed that fic. I'm going to go tell my friends to read it... *hugs a Katsuya plushie, him being a favorite character*

You do a good job of getting inside the character's heads. I applaud you for that... *claps, again* It sounds like a cool idea to attempt someone with a yami next.

Lol, very, er, Jou. _;

Loved the way you started and ended it... But would someone who was writing that all by hand make all of those mistakes?

I think you should try Bakura next, he seems like a person who would have alot to say/would be good at writing assignments. *shrugs*

-Hioki