Wow, this really sad. Good job Lady YB! I almost cried! Y. Bakura must be really mad about that though. Tell Y. Bakura he's weird for me please!

... He went mad with grief. *blinks* Why am I not surprised? So if I'm correct, that demon of his was actually Malik. And he killed him.

*thumbs up* That took me a while to figure out,

brittney

I don't know if you'll ever get this. It's been 4 years since i read this fan fic and I haven't forgotten it since. I'm afraid that someday it will be lost forever, so I printed it out. If you do get this review, please e-mail me.

put in the subject: fanfic

I'll get your message.

I just wanted you to know that this story is one of the best fan fics I've ever read and that I think you are an excellent author.

I hope you get this, and I hope to hear from you soon,

Crystal Polite

OMG!

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He killed malik!

Oh man this is SO scary! I mean, the whole time it was just twisting and turning, and first ryou was dead, then he wasn't, then he was, then Bakura thought he wasn't, but he actually was.

The first chapter was plain sad, the second totally scary, the third was totally fluffy, the forth was sad, again, and the last one was just plain horrific. So it goes like this: sad, scary, happy, sad, horrific. Totally unexpected.

How'd you think up this story? It rocks! And will give little children nightmares, too. (:

Wow.

Can I just say wow...

I love the reality play you orcastrated, the utter madness and real visuals. The terrifying moments, sweetness and dull hope that you didn't really know what the reality was.

Simply Beautiful.

This was the best f*cking story I ever read!

I heart this!

Oh My goodness! I love this! I have to stop reading for tonight, but tomorrow i will pick up and read the rest! I love it!

I'm not going to leave my room for a week, and I'm not going to sleep for a long while..that was the best horror/tragedy story ever!

so let me get this straight..instead of killing the demon..Bakura ended up killing Marik? at least that's what it sounded like to me.

*sudders* I thought Bakura found a way to bring Ryou back to life..not kill himself..darn..now whenever I close my eyes I see casades of blood and it's kinda freaking me out..

None the less, still the best!

That was a terribly angsty and insanity filled story. And I lurved it, I lurved it so much! [Huggles you] You're the best! [Weeps] It was so sad, watching Baku-cahn loose his mind...No eplilouge? Oh well! The ending is explained...[Pets crazyinsane Baku-chan]

I found this fic on a livejournal community: YgoGoodfics, where people reccomend fics to eachother...which is fitting, becasue it's very very good! You had me hooked from the first chapter...so much imagry and sybolism *gets chills* loved it!

*Shudders* Good grief could you possibly have gotten any more morbid, dark, depressing or insane? I think not. Kudos to you. *shudders* but there are still so many unanswered questions was it real or not, was malik really the demon and which version was the real Ryou? I must know! great story by the way, but please, just promise me nothing terrible like that will happen in drawing down the moon and we'll be just fine. *shudders* I honestly think you have creeped me out for the next week straight, great job can't wait to read more of your stuff.

I don't know which disturbs me more. The fact that you actually thought this out and wrote it down or the fact that I read it. I love itand its confusing dream-like quality. If anything it was poetic and confusing. Or just confusing. Like a waking dream. One like Bakura had. I like the name you came up with for bakura at the end, the Kura whatshisname... But a well done horrifying story, and so much death and blood and decay...

That was beautifully written.
The delicate placement of facts and words seperates the reader from reality and dreams almost like the characters.
If you get drawn into the fic, trap yourself so far that you pick up the hints and undertones, you have trouble getting yourself to forget the fic.
You have fantastic talent and ability to have your writing skill so powerful.
This is a fic that you can always re-read, because each time you read it, you pick something else up.
Readers have left reviews saying that they didn't understand - all they did was read a bunch of pretty words. No, you wrote a story that forces the reader to become lost in the ideas, trying to find the right ending. We each came to a conclusion about the mystery parts of the fic, but we'll never truly understand the suprise you left for us, until we read it again and again.
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Keep up the fantastic work, I can't wait to read more of your fiction.
(sorry about any typos ;)

Wow, I never once thought of Bakura's name to be interpreted this way. Soul of Kuru Eruna. You really got some gears spinning there. Keep it up. _

Wonderful! I spent about the whole chapter with my jaw hanging open, then finally started crying when Bakura realized he'd been daydreaming all along, making up fantasies in the park to comfort himself. It's just... so... sad...!
Yes, he's in character! For the manga at least-he torments Ryou and is obsessed by him all the same. So if he contributed to his death... Oh, gawd...
I love your idea about ba-kura, by the way.