Dark and well-written. Interesting take on the plot, and I love the drama the rain adds to the scenery. Nicely done.

That was ... weird. Good, but dark.

Hmm I liked this one oddly dark yet still romantic at the end, good job

Whoa! That was dark.

This is really good. Using Eveanesences Immortal really blended well. You are a good writer.

Nice work - I enjoy "the dark side" of the JS story. Although many fans will disagree with me I have always seen Jareth's relationship with Sarah as having dark undercurrents. Thank you for giving me a breath of fresh air and delight.

Excelent, excellent job. First Labyrinth fanfiction I've actually liked. I can't think f a critique beyond I wish it was longer!

And on a side note, I hope whatever is going on in your persnal life gets better.

One word: delicious!

I've always loved Jareth, and though it was an impossible of sorts, thetension between them talked of his interest for her, so this fic, even with all its darkness, amde justice to both characters and the story. Thanks for this enjoyable experience.

Very, very good. One of the best J/S one shots I've had the pleasure of reading. Random inspiration is definitely the best inspiration. Please keep writing...it was excellent.

Wow nice! I like it allot.

Definately ignore people who don't bother buying the CD to know what the actual lyrics are. "Fearing you, Loving you" is correct (I have both "Fallen" and "Origin" and am a devoted Evanescence fan).

The premise of Haunted is wonderful. This is a very good plot. I think you captured both of them very well. There is need of a bit of tweaking with some of the wording, but not bad since you didn't mention using a Beta.

It would be great to know "What happens now"...maybe use the song "Missing."

That was a great fanfic. Althuogh, I really don't mean to nag but the song goes..."Fearing you, loathing you..." It's 'loathing', not loving. But hey, a LOT of people make that mistake.

great

oh my! . can't realy sat anything, besides wow and oh my, at the moment, *hands he an award and walks off wondering how she'll get her vocabulary back*

I like I like, and I think you should continue it.