oh thats good. loved the little references to things. especially the simpsons ones. i recently saw the one with mulder and scully in it. he he!

In one word: HILLARIOUS!
Absolutely astounding! U topped ur others-didn't think it woz poss but u did!
Fab stuff-write more.
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Lol! A little abrupt ending there, but still really funny! I saw BOTH those episodes of the simpsons, with the XFiles and the Mr Burns one. lol great parody.

well i gotta say im in sttitches.I found that so funny especially at the ned when jack sks jacob does he shoot anyone who gets close to his daughter.

well done,loved it!

LMAO LMAO LOL! funny! that's going to stop him getting grandkids anytime soon!

Jack's *alibi* is probably one of the funniest lines I've ever read. I still can't stop laughing every time I picture it! (And boy, can I picture it!)

That wasa really funny! LOL I really enjoyed it! Thanks for writing it... I love the whole Lie detector part!

This section made me laugh for about ten minutes.

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"Mr O'Neill, I am going to ask you a series of yes or no questions, and you must answer truthfully. Do you understand?"

"Yes."

(Lie detector explodes)

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Sorry I didn't review earlier on.

After some nasty racist comments from a certain Brian guy on this website I was very down and didn't feel like having anything to do with writing and reviewing.

Just want to say keep up the good work.