Interesting story. I can’t wait to see what you have planned next!

world domination line is hilarious.

hope to continue reading this, great story so far

i don't know which is more funny: Ickle Duddykins with a pig's tail or with a pink beard.

so the author of Snape's gift was an arrogant arse? are you sure it wasn't Lockhart. wait, then the name would have to do with being an incompetent idiot

one of these days Hagrid is going to get himself killed. i mean, what idiot crosses a snake with a centipede! i don't even want to know how he knows that they're venemous. p.s. sorry if i spelt some words wrong. it's 1 in the morning and i can't sleep.

I just found this story today and I love it! It's funny and very well written, I am glad that it wasn't a Mary-Sue though, made me nervous the whole way through, I also know its really late for a review but I am hoping you are still getting this:

I really REALLY want you to continue, this is a really interesting story and I enjoyed every minute of it and I am sure I'm not the only one.

So please do update even a small AN will do I guess saying that you are alive and well

Hope you are able to read this

Christine Jay

Great story. Too bad it's abandoned.

oooooooo i love this story, so has lucius roken out of azkaban? and will severus become a PROPER farther figure?

Oh sorry, I got the anagram now :)

Umm I haven't finished reading this story, I will review it fully when I will end it, but you wrote the Saholna is an anagram for not a snake in hebrew.. and your name is Hebrew.. I live in israel too.. to do tell me how saholna(ro whatever it is...) is lo nachash? haha.. Anyway I'm most impressed from your vocabulary !

! i LOVE the story!:) i wanna know more about neta too

;D

I must say I enjoyed that last bit. :D

J x

I love the repetition of the line: "Honestly, Albus, you simply cannot be serious."

Its very amusing!

J x

So far a fairly interesting story. Though sketchy. Why was Neta a girl of about the same age of Harry in a "night club" drawing pictures... other then Snapes exasperation I don't see much humor so far,. But I have enjoyed reading it!