Lovely, easy, short - it saves life, all the tenderness you fit into this You kindly.

Woah, that was... idk, breathtaking? Even though I'm not sure I understood everything in the fic, it was somehow refreshing to read!

Thank you for the fic!

Wow! This was... beautiful. So delicate and deep and simple. I'm quite in love with this sort story. Well done!

Wow... just wow. This broke my heart.

So well written, loved it, amazing :)

Beautiful. Just beautiful.

Absolutely stunning writing. It's sharp and tight and uncomfortable, just as you wanted it to be. And it's amazing.

Oh, Neji. He never... wow. That's really sadder then it should be... never really had a choice now, did he? :/

wonderful.

kinda sad. but i still like it

That made me a little sad.

Beautiful, gorgeous, inspiring.

Pick one and you'll have the perfect description for this fic.

I already liked NejiHina when I read this, due to recent exposure to fics and fanart. When I saw this, of course, it seemed interesting-and it was obviously a Neji centric fic. You many Neji fics out there, and given your refreshing take on the Yondaime I figured I'd try this as well.

How glad I am that I did. The descriptions are wonderful and perfect and spontaneous, and so true. All of your metaphors/similes blend in so well you can hardly tell comparisons from the truth. And above all, your characterization of the two: they were forced to get married, yes. They didn't have a choice, no. But...

I can't really explain how, but the hope and the love and all of the emotions are just intertwined so well that it gives you a feeling of completion when you finish, like their story isn't quite done...but it'll work out all the same. And that's really all you need to know.

I love the fact that you kept it short, and didn't elaborate and stall. You had a message you were trying to portray; an emotion; a story, and you did that perfectly with each sentence-and dare I say it, each WORD.

My god, I love your writing. Who are you on lj? I already find myself thirsting for more of your fics.

Thanks for giving a gift to the world and posting 'The Sun' and .

Sincerely,

Lizzie

To me, this somehow just screams, "NEJITENTEN!" For example, the line,

"Her palm is tucked near her face, even in sleep her fingertips twitch—old reflex, schooled into her body by nervous habit."

Tenten is a weapons mistress, it would make sense that her hands twitch as if holding a weapon.

Awesome story!

Oh, Neji.