Honestly, this is just fantastic. I always expect mediocre writing when it comes to fan-fictions but I was surprised and delighted when I was reading this and the storyline is brilliant too! It would warm my heart if you could finish it but that's probably unlikely considering the last time you updated. However, if you ever publish a book about anything please tell me as I would love to read it no matter what it's about.

I really love this fanfiction, please continue! You said you're self-concious about your writing abilities, but i tell you you're fantastic! As someone who is in the process of learning English, i am learning a lot from this, you're using words i've never heard before and i get a better understanding of how words are used. Adding to this, i'm in love with this story, it is just AMAZING, so please if it's possible, continue :D

Yes, you are a good writer - stop doubting yourself. I very much hope that you will continue this story. Just one thing I'm finding a little distracting: you keep using an apostrophe in 'its'. The apostrophe is only needed when you are using the short form of 'it is'. Hope you won't mind me mentioning this - I really am enjoying the story.

Hi, I've only just found your story. I've really enjoyed it so far. It seems that you haven't added to it for a few years, but I would love you to continue and complete it if you can.

nooo xx
sigh... oh well it wa while the story lasted. so sad it is abandoned tho... xx

Any more?

Please finish this story, it is really well written!

Ok it had been 10 yrs. I just found a review from my last acc on this fic and its from 2007 XD. Time really passes quickly and we don't even realize enough to remember it was 5 or 10 yrs. Ha! life.

Oh my god. I favorited this story probably some 5-7 years back? I don't even remember now. I even forgot the password of the acc I favorited it from (but remembered its name and linked it to my new acc) Even at that time as far as I remember this was 'abandoned/on hiatus' for years I think. And now suddenly I happen to open that linked acc and what I see? Its updated? Thats a miracle to me.

Also went to your profile just to see whatsup, and saw the update. I am about 29 years myself right now, and I kind of hope I won't loose my love for these innocent fictional interests like you didn't all these years. Even tho life is harsh, and bitter and I wonder for how long exactly can I hold these interests? I'm almost 30 isn't it time I forget about these interests? But here you are, back to this story and I'm just so glad you pulled it through to a level that you were able to focus on hobbies again? I'm somehow just very happy for you, and somehow feeling very encouraged?

What do you say changed in your fictional interests after many ears? Did you start seeing characters differently? Did you favorites changed? I'm kind of curious? Please feel free to reply or PM if you have the time. I'd love to have a chat with you.

Sincerely
One of the fan of you fic

Love you story! Please update more soon!

Update, please. :)

Hey! This is really good! Love the story and the style and can't wait for the next update. :)

About time Harry gows a pair in this story! I was starting to think you had a fetish for making Harry a kidnapped princess! With snape as the dungeon master tying him up! Finally nice to see the "real" harry potter for a change!

It's honestly creepy. They abducted and drugged him. Like seriously! This is illegal!

As far as I had read today, it has been interresting and I had trouble leaving it to do my cleaning and such...naughty story keeping me from my daily tasks