I think you need to continue it. It's good.

Are you still working on this story? It's very interesting; I hope to be able to read more of it sometime.

i like your story you should update D

please add more

please add more

Hey,
Good story. I am not sure I follow you though. At the end the were wolves bow basically to Selene and michael, and now they hunt them.
Wilshire O'Bloom,
Try some of mine

Wow...really good, and really powerful! I loved it! I really enjoyed the unique story that you put in, it really comes together. The only thing I might add is that the two cops that took Michael in their car (in the movie) were acually Lycans not Vampires, and to my belief you put them in as Vampires, but just a little thing don't worry about it! keep going, I really want to read more!
MOOSEY

Hey keep up the story, its just staring to get intersting.
Shannon

Inconsequential . . .

I DEMAND MORE!
please, please, please with sugar on top! OK you drive a hard bargin I'll add 4 stawberrys! LOL no one can resist the strawberrys!

Update, whoohoo!

Wow, great story. THe action is cool. Hesper is extremely realistic. I'm glad Adam is back in the picture. I thought he was cute and sweet. Michael is a bit broody, but that's to be expected. It would be cool if he started doing medical work again. I can't say I liked Raze in the movie, he scared me too much. But you made him pretty cool in this story.
One little note of aggravation, however, the word you are looking for is lair(cave, secret hiding place, home for animals, etc), not liar(someone who lies)
Keep writing, this is an interesting story.

I was a bit skeptical in the beginning about your fanfiction on 'Underworld 2', but once I started to read the first chapters of your story, I pulled into it. It's coming along great! I like the interesting situation with Raze and Hesper, although I can't imagine Raze doing some of the things mention. I just think he's too massive. :x
I love how you're telling how you picture the next Underworld, and I guess there won't be much 'Selene' spotlight, since the first one seemed to be more of what happens to Selene. :)
However, GREAT story, keep it up. I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
-Vivi

WOMAN!(or man? I don't know) you need to write like faster or something..cause I wanna read more! *goes in corner and cries*

when are you going to update.